Reviews for Apparition
| Beer Good |
01/20/06 - 01:32AM |
16: 16: Bigger fish |
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I love it when Angel is insecure like that. Not very creature-of-the-night of him. And the dart thing was inspired. (Oh and yeah, Buffy IS screwed. It would seem.)
Author's Response: That was a last minute joke I thought would work. i also thought it would be better then Buffy falling flat on her face. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/19/06 - 11:20PM |
16: 16: Bigger fish |
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Buffys screwed.
Author's Response: dealing with genius like that the slayer has no chance. thanks for reviewing |
| Alex Wert |
01/19/06 - 10:28PM |
16: 16: Bigger fish |
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Hey, good funny again. But use 'than' instead of 'then' when comparing things.
Author's Response: Sorry about that fingers too fast for brain. thanks for reviewing |
| Psyche2 |
01/17/06 - 07:28PM |
15: 15: So not evil! |
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I really like this, its cute and witty and has a terrific plot! Update soon!!
Author's Response: thanks a lot I'm happy how this turned out. it has a grim topic but i try to make it as lighthearted as possible. thanks for reviewing |
| littlewiccan |
01/17/06 - 01:42PM |
15: 15: So not evil! |
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haha love WIllow's accusation, especially the bit about getting Buffy to stab Beth w/ things. : )
Author's Response: Irrational Willow is fun to write. Thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
01/17/06 - 02:41AM |
15: 15: So not evil! |
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You know, I was just thinking to myself yesterday, "whatever happened to 'Apparition'?" And here it is. I absolutely love the way you write Willow - "evil things that are evil", indeed. Keep it up!
Author's Response: sorry for the late post i was a little too focused on my 'Hell on Earth' fics but I'm back on track now. i have to say that Jealous Willow is fun to write. coming up with more and more irrational things for her to say is just a hoot. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/16/06 - 10:17PM |
15: 15: So not evil! |
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Great update. I think you have Willow down really well.
Author's Response: Thanks i try really hard to get the characters right. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/16/06 - 10:11PM |
15: 15: So not evil! |
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Poor Willow, she never gets the guy. I thought You'd given up on this, I think you've got the same problem I have. We know we should only do ,one, or two stroy's at a time, but can't stop areselves, from doing seven, or eight. Good Work.
Author's Response: I hadn't given up i just got too into Trinity that i never got around to my other stories. I'm going back to them now so look out. as for Willow she is having a hard time with this. how would you react if you were her and the guy you liked was both with another girl and dead? thanks for reviewing |
| Sinister |
01/01/06 - 12:17PM |
3: 3: Xander the annoying ghost |
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Hahaha...this is funny stuff. Poor Xander though. I hope he finds his purpuse soon. Great job!
Author's Response: oh don't worry he will. thanks for reviewing |
| littlewiccan |
12/21/05 - 06:41PM |
14: 14: The body and stuff |
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I like it. its getting really good. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: thanks I'll update soon. thanks for reviewing |
| Alex Wert |
12/16/05 - 01:11AM |
14: 14: The body and stuff |
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I love Jealous!Willow. And the whole Canadian/English thing (very not similar accents though a lot of people can still get them confused). I would like to see better proofreading though. I know it's exciting to get a new chapter up but I'm a stickler.
Author's Response: I figure when Willow gets jealous her logic flies out the window. you find people get a lot of the British colony accents confused that's why i though it would be a good joke. thanks for the spelling tip i have to get back into the habit of reading through before i post. thanks for reviewing. |
| Psyche2 |
12/15/05 - 07:09PM |
14: 14: The body and stuff |
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Cool story. I like this. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks |
| axel |
12/14/05 - 02:55PM |
14: 14: The body and stuff |
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Good Chapeter. Of coarse Spike betrayed them. Hey. If the Demon get's Buffy's body, does that mean a new Slayer won't be called, since the body's technicly Alive? That would be bad.
Author's Response: Yep they would be slayerless and the lucky demon would have a shiny new powers to compliment its own. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
12/14/05 - 03:03AM |
14: 14: The body and stuff |
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Gee, Angel really won't win any gold medals in the planning event, will he? There's a great balance between humour and seriousness in this fic... very season 2-ish. And Spike IS more better than Angel. :-)
Author's Response: I like to keep things even in my fics. you have to admit it's very hard to go 'dead body Ah HA HA HA!' so it's a matter of putting the comedy where it would fit. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/14/05 - 12:10AM |
14: 14: The body and stuff |
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Buffy always takes the bait to get her away from her friends! And I knew Spike would pull something like he did. There was just no way he'd willingly help them out. Looks like Xander wont be getting his body back. Great chapter update soon.
Author's Response: Nope not yet. the necromancer still need to fill the order he got by that demon who wanted the body of the slayer. thanks for reviewing |
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