Reviews for ANDREW!! MAN OF ACTION!
| Alex Wert |
07/10/06 - 10:33PM |
1: Opening credits |
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Why did I never read this before? It's damned funny. And it's damned late in being updated. Get off your ass! (says he who didn't write anything for five months)
Author's Response: See now this is why you were no. 10 on Darcdream top 10 sexiest authors list. haven't concentrated on this story in a while i might get back to it at some but for the moment I'm concentrating on Forever Anne. thanks for reviewing |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
11/23/05 - 03:31PM |
5: PART IV: “SHOOTING SOLUTION!” |
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Awesome story! You definately have Andrew's lines down! I love how you show his innocent, childish side, and at the same time a bit of his more mature side.
Author's Response: Well Andrew is a contradiction like that. particular in series 7 you weren't exactly sure how he would react to being out of his element that's why he's a fun character to write. Thanks for reviewing |
| littlewiccan |
11/23/05 - 10:26AM |
5: PART IV: “SHOOTING SOLUTION!” |
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lol. That was great. This has to be my favorite line though: “Take out? Like on a date? I don’t I have that much money.” haha. Its just so very Andrew. : )
Author's Response: I love making up Andrew lines. he has this fun way of focusing on the irrelevant. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
11/23/05 - 07:05AM |
5: PART IV: “SHOOTING SOLUTION!” |
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*laughs hysterically* Andrew is spot-on - "Miss Shooty Shooterson" indeed. And the "alphabetically" joke was excellent. I'm starting to wonder just how long Wilda will be able to take it before she tries to kill Andrew... Man, that guy's guardian angel is putting in overtime, isn't he?
Author's Response: His guardian angel works on a time share with others. the 'Shooty Shooterson' line i have no idea where that came from it just popped into my head. it sounded like something Andrew would say that he though it sounded like an insult. thanks for reviewing |
| Wonkabar |
11/18/05 - 09:31PM |
4: Part III: “SET PHASERS TO STUNNING!” |
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LOL! I love the TK421 bit, must people don't remember that from Episode IV. I love this story, please update.
Author's Response: Yeah. i don't know why the TK421 quote got stuck in my head but it's one of the obscure Star Wars that did. thanks for reviewing |
| littlewiccan |
11/07/05 - 02:10PM |
4: Part III: “SET PHASERS TO STUNNING!” |
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Haha...This reminds me of an Austin Power's movie and by the way I love Bob's questions. lol. Great job. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. i keeping up spy film tradition by having the villain have the lames plan in the world. thanks for reviewing. |
| Beer Good |
11/06/05 - 02:22PM |
4: Part III: “SET PHASERS TO STUNNING!” |
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“Hehe. That cloud looks like a duck.” "Optimus Prime dead?" I'm absolutely loving this. One thing though - next time, could you use the < hr > tag to make a horizontal line? I had to scroll across a lot to read it...
Author's Response: Sorry about that need to master my HTML. thank's alot for the comments. i finaly found a use for my usless nerd quotes. thanks for reviewing |
| lieselot |
11/05/05 - 12:20PM |
1: Opening credits |
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Funny start!
Author's Response: thank you. thanks for reviewing |
| littlewiccan |
11/04/05 - 07:03PM |
3: Part II: “BASIC IS A FOUR LETTER WORD!” |
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Hahaha, lol, Andrew is such a dork and I love him for it. Funny story. I like it alot so far. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Will do. I have a lot more in store for our man Andrew. thanks for reviewing. |
| redmoon |
10/31/05 - 01:55PM |
2: Part I: “DEATH HOLDS A LIGHT SABRE!” |
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“Whoa, okay. Using your outdoor voice,” LOL!! This is amazing! Keep it going, okay?
Author's Response: will do. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
10/31/05 - 04:14AM |
2: Part I: “DEATH HOLDS A LIGHT SABRE!” |
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You know, I always thought phrases like "lol" and "lmao" are often thrown around a bit too much. Does everyone who uses "lol" in a written text actually laugh out loud? That said: LOL, and I do mean literally. Hilarious, and you write Andrew really well... and everyone else is perfect as well, as larger-than-life spy thrillers go. "You guys are the F.O.R.C.E.?" Poor Wilda, and poor me - a couple more chapters like this and I'll probably bust a gut laughing. But I'm willing to make that sacrifice. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. this was just one of these crazy ideas i had floating around my head. Andrew and spy film just seem to go together. thanks for reviewing |
| Wonkabar |
10/30/05 - 09:26PM |
2: Part I: “DEATH HOLDS A LIGHT SABRE!” |
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Oh, boy...this is going to be fun. I just hope they don't try to give Andrew a 'XXX' tatoo on the back of his neck. LOL.
Author's Response: not so much an 'XXX' more a 'C3PO'. thanks for reviewing. |
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