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I could think of a million words to say
How you make me feel
I think of you a thousand times a day
But none of that is real
You're playing with my mind
I'm hurting deep inside
You manipulated everything I knew
I'm lost within your lies
I guess I should've known
The signals were all there
But I was blinded by false love
You never really cared
I can't think of anything but you
And the way you spoke to me
I thought your promises were true
But now I can't even see
The spell you put on me
I didn't recognise
But now I understand that you were
Living in disguise
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