This poem was actually written about a completely different subject, but I realised that it fit with the whole Buffy/Angel mess. I don't own anything but the words. The rest of it belongs to Joss and Co. so PLEASE don't sue me!
(NOTE: This is from Buffy's POV)
Sometimes I can still feel you
Smell you in my hair
See you in the doorway
Sometimes I wonder
What might have been
If we had a second chance
Sometimes one of your socks
Sneaks out from under my bed
And I cry
Sometimes I wish
That I hadn't done what I did
And told you to leave me alone
Sometimes I still miss you
And think maybe
The hurt would go away
Sometimes I think
That if you came back
You'd be different somehow
Sometimes I hope
That you WILL come back
And hurt me again
Please tell me how I'm doing. I'd love feedback.
I'm really new at this so a little critiscism would be great.
rosegirl@alloymail.com
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