Reviews for Deja Vu
| Alex Wert |
01/31/06 - 12:26AM |
1: One |
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| I loved the abundance of Canadian content, but with all the food references (which made me hungry - I ate an entire pizza during the reading of this) no reference at all to poutine? Not even a mention of how disgusting the concept sounds (dammit, I'm hungry again)?
I usually don't like Dru, but you wrote her very well. I only wish everyone could have been tied more closely together at the end to make all the different aspects of the story seem as one, rather than the more disjointed feeling I have right now. |
| Spike_sPetSlayer |
06/15/05 - 03:26AM |
26: Twenty-six/Conclusion |
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| Good story--plausible plotline. |
| peggstarr |
05/22/05 - 04:44PM |
1: One |
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| OMG I LOVE IT! FANTASTIC! So rare to find something so imaginitive and so well fleshed out in a TRUE fan fiction! YOu stay true to the charicters and yet keep it fresh and interesting! Your thoughts are coherent and each segment flows together effortlessly! I enjoyed reading this thoroughly! Keep writing you have a true talent!
Ever think of creating your own story seperate from the "scoobie" charicters??? I think you would be great at expanding this world! |
| redmoon |
05/16/05 - 02:08PM |
10: Ten |
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| I am continually amazed by your multicultural span of knowledge. Sixes and sevens: Chaucer would be proud! |
| redmoon |
05/16/05 - 01:45PM |
9: Nine |
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| Excellent. I like how Will is a 'Bloody awful poet'. For some sad reason, I hope Lucien finds what he's looking for. Looking forward to more! |
| redmoon |
05/03/05 - 12:33PM |
8: Eight |
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| Sexy chapter. Also quite funny. "-semi North London accent..." I'm glad Will and 'Anne' finally met. |
| Cursed |
04/24/05 - 12:13PM |
1: One |
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Absolutely fantastic story, extremely well-written, brilliant characterisation and utterly compelling. Good enough, I signed up with this site specifically to write this! One complaint: "Cottswalds" is actually 'Cotswolds' -- I live on the edge of them!
And if you want some local info about Bath to flesh out your descriptions, www.visitbath.co.uk will be of great help.
Please keep writing!! I'm dying to see how it turns out....
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! .My stupid document program kept telling me that "Cottswalds" was the correct spelling! Bernard was originally introduced in another fic--I'll have to go change it there, too, but it may take me some time, 'cause it appears ina lt of chapters in quite a few sites. But, from now on, I can correct it. |
| redmoon |
04/11/05 - 04:30PM |
6: Six |
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| Canada Rules! Though I'm not yet sure where the individual threads of the story are going, or how they're going to come together, they are each extremely well written. As always, looking forward to reading more. |
| redmoon |
04/10/05 - 09:28PM |
5: Five |
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Extremely deep and moving. Your questions are certainly vaild and intellectually challenging. I am reminded of a particular version of the origin of Dracula, being the eternally damned Judas Escariot, condemned to revile the tokens of his betrayal and never to enter the kingdom of heaven. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to submit such decisive and cogent reviews. They are much appreciated. The majority of my work tends to be in the -10,000 words range and this is the first time I have attempted a fic that is this long and involved. It means a lot that you are reading and enjoying it and taking the time to offer insightful comments. Thank you again!
spikeNdru |
| redmoon |
04/10/05 - 09:12PM |
4: Four |
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| Again brilliant. I am extremely impressed. I am reading the next chapter right now. |
| redmoon |
04/10/05 - 08:49PM |
3: Three |
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| Stunning historical integration. I like that you've revived the three-race concept of vampires. Excellent work; going in my favorites. |
| redmoon |
04/10/05 - 08:33PM |
2: Two |
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| Another excellent chapter. You have a remarkable ability to write very believable characters and situations. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| redmoon |
04/09/05 - 10:03PM |
1: One |
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| Waking up bloody and incognizant in Quebec City: We've all been there. Kudos on using frisson in a sentence! Great start, can't wait to read more. |
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