Reviews for The Gift, Take Two
| Alex Wert |
01/07/06 - 03:39AM |
17: Chapter 17: In Vampire Veritas |
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| As Beer Good pointed out to me, it's scotch whisky, without the e. I checked my bottles and rye is also spelled whisky. I guess it's only JD that's whiskey and Irish stuff (loke BG said but I can't confirm right now since my stocks are quite limited). Good story though. |
| Javian |
12/31/05 - 05:02PM |
1: Chapter 1: Bad Idea |
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| Awesome chapter! |
| wav |
08/21/05 - 02:39PM |
19: Chapter 19: In The Blood |
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| interesting twist. Thanks for updating. |
| zman |
08/20/05 - 09:09PM |
19: Chapter 19: In The Blood |
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| Nicely developing the harpy line. I'm hooked.
What's next ? :) |
| zman |
08/20/05 - 08:21PM |
3: Chapter 3: The Big Scaredy Runaway |
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| I like that you kept the victory pyrrhic, albeit for Faith instead of Buffy. I felt that Faith came off as a true warrior in this chapter -- she understood the "bills that must be paid." Please keep uf the good work. |
| zman |
08/20/05 - 08:13PM |
1: Chapter 1: Bad Idea |
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| Very nice. The internal dialogue for Faith is spot-on. While this medium loses the visual impact of television (Sarah Gellar's expressiveness is precisely tuned to let the viewer know what she's thinking), your use of the internal dialog is great -- very Faith-ish.
Highly enjoyable. |
| axel |
06/05/05 - 10:41PM |
17: Chapter 17: In Vampire Veritas |
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| Now this is a twist, A story where Angel is the only one not in love with Buffy, Faith Spike, Willow (Yes I see that coming) They all want her. I guess Angel got tired of the soap oprah. Anyway good job keep it up. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/11/05 - 02:34AM |
4: Chapter 4: Aftermath |
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| Oh.That's good.Angel?and just leaving it like that.This is an amazing story. I like it so much. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/11/05 - 02:18AM |
3: Chapter 3: The Big Scaredy Runaway |
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| Wow.Faith died.That's crazy.Amazing chapter. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/11/05 - 01:52AM |
2: Chapter 2: Progress |
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| Again great chapter.You're a great author. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/11/05 - 01:42AM |
1: Chapter 1: Bad Idea |
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| Great chapter.I like how Faith was arguing with herself in parts of the story.Can't wait to read the next chapter.Once again great chapter. |
| rockangelz25 |
03/22/05 - 07:59PM |
16: Chapter 16: Rebirth |
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| Wow. The addition is just as great as all of your other chapters. The characters are all great, and I'm really curious to see what's going to happen next. Obviously, the five stars. |
| wav |
12/02/04 - 01:39AM |
15: Chapter 15: First Son |
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| I'm still with ya! I'm not a huge Fuffy fan, but the overall writing, and characterization is wonderful, and I always check for updates on this story. Keep up the great work. :) |
| Michael J |
12/01/04 - 04:05PM |
15: Chapter 15: First Son |
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OH GOD!! PLEASE GOD NO!! Do NOT do what I think you're about to do. The very thought of Bangel is enough to make me blow chunks. Great chapter. Love Buffy's frustration at Faith avoiding the issue. Pot, meet kettle. They're so alike it's ridiculous. Buffy using Dawn as a weak point to talk Faith into staying was low, but it still works. I also like the way you worked the canon into your story. Willow using the memory spell came out of nowhere and her wigging over Buffy/Faith was wonderful. Update again...soon.
Author's Response: Wouls I do that? bult up all this Fuffy tension only to have B fall into Angel's arms? Surely that would make me some kind of sadist...
You'll just have to wait and see :-P |
| Michael J |
10/13/04 - 10:51AM |
14: Chapter 14: Happy Birthday? |
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| Interesting twist. I think you could've dragged out the Buffy/Faith angst for another chapter, but seeing as how I'm a tad impatient as a reader, I'm glad you got right to the point. The Scooby reactions should be fabulous. Enjoying the work so far, keep it up. |
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