Reviews for Slayers
| axel |
06/28/06 - 10:36PM |
3: Part Three |
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Great Story. Is there going to be a sequle maybe? I'd like to see them get busy, uh I mean be happy.
Author's Response: Hahaha! Of course...get happy...I knew that was what you meant. I'm not really sure if there's going to be a sequle or not, but maybe if I get enough people who want one. I was also considering maybe just adding more to this story but I haven't really decided exactly what I'm going to do yet. Thanks for all your reviews though I love the feedback. |
| axel |
06/13/06 - 05:48PM |
2: Part Two |
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Sure Buffy. Xander will tell a joke, and you'll forget kissing a girl HA! I love this. And not just for the Hot Lesbo Action (Although that's cool too. Hey, I'm a guy) It well written. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping that for my male readers it wasn't just going to be a story with some hot lesbo action, even though I am glad that my writing was good enough to make it hot. =) I was hoping it was would also be just a good story in general so I'm glad that worked. Thanks again for the review. |
| BelovedSlayer |
06/13/06 - 01:14PM |
1: Part One |
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From the other awesoem fics that i read by you this one definitely stands the whole Buffy/Faith issue. this is actually the first time i read something concerning them as a potential couple so im not sure how the other writers do this sort of thing. its definitely interesting to read and i like that you written down their struggles and their confusion right after what had happened in the alley and i agree i think this type of thing would happen considering some of the bad decisions they have done when it comes to love or whatever you want to call it. im definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter so please update asap:)
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your enjoying it. I'm most likely just going to keep this as a short story so I'm probably only going to have one more part to it just to close things up and then leave the rest to the imagination. Thanks so much for the review and I'll be sure to update as soon as I get the chance. |
| axel |
06/08/06 - 08:27PM |
1: Part One |
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Oh yeah. Me likey. And yes, it made more sense that most of the Faith Buffy things. And I did notice what beer pointed out. I wasn't going to say anything, but since he pointed it out. Please fix it, cause Kills the mood.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And don't worry I will def be fixing that little problem right away lol. I def laughed my ass off when I noticed that though but your right...totally kills the mood. Thanks again! |
| Beer Good |
06/08/06 - 06:43PM |
1: Part One |
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Agree with Terry. IMO, a lot of Faith/Buffy stories have the problem that you don't really buy HOW they get together; they are too much at odds and too much alike (though they'd never see that themselves) to just suddenly be a couple. This makes a lot of sense, and it's very much in character.
Only tiny piece of criticism: you might wanna check the spelling of the sentence "She then slowly moved her hands to Faith’s back reaching up her shit longing to touch her soft skin." I know it's NC-17, but still... yuck. :-)
Author's Response: I agree with you about other Faith/Buffy stories. I've noticed that most of them just start it out as Buffy and Faith being together but don't explain how it happened. That's why I wanted to show in this story...how they would get together. Also thank you very much for pointing out that little mispelling lol. I don't even usually prof my stories because I'm just too lazy but I proffed this one like 3 times and for some reason I just didn't catch that. But I laughed my ass off when you pointed it out lol. Anyway thanks again for reviewing! |
| terry |
06/08/06 - 03:12PM |
1: Part One |
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Ok, that was totally hot! But also, and perhaps more importantly, I buy it. After the fight with the first, all that adrenaline and all the loss and everything would just overflow. Buffy and Faith have a history together. It’s mostly a confrontational history. But Faith’s past “hungry and horny” comments and Buffy’s fatal attraction to Spike make it pretty clear that from fighting to kissing isn’t too far of a trip for either of them.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and as you said perhaps more importantly I'm really glad that you bought it as well. To be honist I had never really thought about Buffy/Faith until I started seeing people talk about them on this forum and then I realized how well they would actually fit. I'm not sure they could ever be an actual couple though and if they were I don't think it would really last long. I just think they definitly have this undeniable physical attraction to each other and thats what sparked this idea. I was afraid it might be a little unbelievable though so it's good to know that I was wrong. Thanks again for reviewing! |
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