Reviews for Fallen from Grace.
| always angel |
08/10/06 - 01:17PM |
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| Poor Oz, that really sucks. The giant ants and Sklyer with the muffins was really great. And now you're bringing in Willow. I can't wait to see how that goes. |
| Beer Good |
05/09/06 - 02:59AM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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You actually used the muffin thing! Brilliant! I thought you were just recycling the joke at first, and then... hey, so does this mean Skyler was actually awake in Biology, since she knows about ants? And "HEY! I MIGHT NEED THOSE!" Perfect. Now let's see, who could help them... hmmm...
Author's Response: Skyler's actualy kind of brainy, she just doesn't want anyone to know it (Wouldn't fit her image, and all) Thanks. |
| Sinister |
05/08/06 - 11:34PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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Awesome ending! The muffin thing was a nice touch lol. This is getting very interesting and I hope that the powerful person Kennedy knows that can help Oz and Maggie is who I think it is =) That will make for a very interesting chapter...can't wait for an update. Great work as always!
Author's Response: Ok, your right, the person Kenny knows is Andrew, I can't trick you. Thanks. |
| redmoon |
05/08/06 - 10:29PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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Haha, Death by Muffins. Classic. I like how it actually was useful with the ants and all. Poor Oz. I guess it makes sense that he has a silver bullet. I'm surprised he hadn't told anyone about it earlier (as it's useless if no one but him knows). So the glowey being is Jehovah, eh? Interesting. I wonder what the black idol is - and if the person who can help Maggie and Oz is who I think she is. Upsate soon!
Author's Response: The Light being (Samual), is NOT Jehovah, he just repesents him. And Oz hadn't told anyone about the bullet, because he was saving it for Veruca. He's not suicidal. Thanks. |
| Timan |
05/08/06 - 09:00PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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The divine one huh? sounds like a cool central character for a story. great end i cant way to see where that lead or if Meggy gonna be okay. good job
Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't resist. (I'm just waiting for Beccy, or Nighthawk to beat up a vamp, named Axel. Who's Meggy though. Or did you mean Maggie? I don't know if she'll be Ok. I feel like I should kill someone. But I can't bring myself to Kill Skyler. People got upset when they thought I might kill Kenny (which was a shock, since people hate her) They'd kill me, if I killed Oz. And Faith, not going to happen. But Maggie, may be in trouble. Oh, and I;ve given enough clues, about who Nicky really is, is you know what to look for. Thanks. |
| redmoon |
05/02/06 - 06:07PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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Apple Dumpling gang, ha! I like it. I think being decapitated is something that could get even the most tight lipped of us a little vocal. Just wondering (not really important) is Oz still wolfy, or is it human-Oz head which is talking. Does wolfy Oz even talk? Hm. Anyway, enough about that. Great job, and I hope you update soon (and repost, not just "edit" - I hate looking through the old end of the list). Good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, everyone wanted a name, so I picked the worst possible one HA HA HA! I'm kidding, that's not the name. (Or is it?) Oh, and Oz's head is normal. But he can talk, in wolf form. I thought I'd made that clear, before, but I guess not. Sorry though, I will just edit it. But all you have to do, is go to the part that says, ACT 3. That's not so bad, is it? Thanks for reviewing, everybody. |
| Sinister |
05/01/06 - 02:50PM |
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| Great work as always! I'm glad Oz is...ok...I guess thats what you would call him. I loved Kennedy, "calm down Oz your getting out of character again," lol that was priceless. Can't wait to read more! |
| Timan |
05/01/06 - 08:20AM |
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| great start so far you really got me interested in what is happening. i like the part with Oz being body-less and grumpy. I'm very interested in what Maggie saw i know how hard it is to write for psychics because of Heidi but you have doe exceptionally well. great job i cant wait to read the end of it. |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
05/01/06 - 07:34AM |
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| Hey, this is looking interesting! |
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