Reviews for Discipline
| MissEdith |
03/27/06 - 03:51PM |
11: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part II |
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This is one of my favorite chapters of all. Talk about roller coaster. First I'm going "yay, Xander saved Willow," then "oh no, Oz," then "OMG GILES AND JENNY", then trying to work out who would possess who and figuring for Jenny and James to get Buffy, then going "holy crap, Buffy's about to get shot". So she's got to survive...cuz Angelus will. And then Giles and Jenny can find peace and everything will be happy...hey, I can dream.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Well, we'll see... as someone pointed out, in Sunnydale even death seems to be no more than a minor inconvenience. |
| slayerfest |
03/27/06 - 12:24AM |
11: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part II |
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You should win a prize. I love the way you completely rearranged the events; everything's happening quite sequentially. I'm getting a much better grip on the story; I intend to read it all the way through again at some point to see if I can pinpoint whatever problem there may have been. Avidly anticipating the next chapter... excellent work, I must say.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks. Feel free to send me any prizes or gifts through the mail, I'm thoroughly bribable. :-) |
| Alex Wert |
03/26/06 - 08:15PM |
11: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part II |
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Hmm... that's not the way it happened on the show... Its too bad this whole student/teacher thing didn't happen now instead of the '50's because now its pretty much old hat. Unlike slayerfest and others I haven't had a problem following this plot - mostly I guess because I read it in one go. I suppose everything will be revealed in good time (or bad time or whenever chapters eventually get put upt) but for now I'll have to content myself with trying to figure out who is behind all this.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hopefully I'll work up a better pace now that I've finally got this chapter out - it wasn't easy to write, for some reason. |
| axel |
03/26/06 - 04:03PM |
11: Don't Walk Away From Me, Part II |
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Damn!
Author's Response: Yep! |
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