Reviews for Jenga
| Peaches Girl |
03/22/06 - 11:28PM |
3: Playing Again |
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Bravo, fantastic, I knew you had it down pat. That's def. the Faith we all know and love. I love the 'SNL quality' jibe, good one. I so enjoyed this, great story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Peaches. |
| phantom |
03/22/06 - 01:37PM |
1: Tumbling Down |
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Awesome! omg.. I wanted to start clapping when Willow did the levitating thing. I thought Faithy was actually gonna die! ... Kennedy was a nice touch all pissed off that she had to stand in the rain! Good job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sneaky putting the character death warning on it. Thanks. |
| Beer Good |
03/22/06 - 02:55AM |
3: Playing Again |
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"cheering for the Sox wasn't helping any either". Hehe. And Willie! And Yosemite Sam, yay! This was a lot of fun, more than I had expected after the first two chapters which were great but more on the broody side... and now this. Excellent job.
Author's Response: I thought you'd like that line. Shoutout to your chapter on Axel's Arean, and sorry about your demise. |
| Beer Good |
03/02/06 - 03:45AM |
2: Picking up the Pieces |
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I had no idea what Jenga was, so I looked it up... I guess you're referring to the game? If so, I see how that would work great as a title, putting things on top of other things until everything collapses... Another really good chapter, you really get inside Faith's head. Hope you feel like writing more of these, because I really enjoy them.
Author's Response: What? No Jenga in your part of the world? That's just not right. |
| Peaches Girl |
03/01/06 - 10:54PM |
2: Picking up the Pieces |
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Yes, that was fantastic. I love how you crawl inside Faith's mind and pour out her feelings. The interaction between the two of them was great. Loved this.
Author's Response: Thanks. Just so you know I'm aiming for one more chapter of this, that's all. 'Kay? |
| Peaches Girl |
02/20/06 - 08:21PM |
1: Tumbling Down |
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I really love this one. You have really captured Faith with your writing. I can see this side of her loving Buffy and lashing out. Great chapter. As for the title, not to sure but maybe, 'Faith's Confessions' or 'Redemtion or Death'. Not to sure about were you may go with this from here so its hard to come up with something better. Anyway I enjoyed reading hope you update soon.
Author's Response: I wasn't planning on going anywhere with this at all. It was supposed to be just this and that's it. Now you've made me pre-empt something else I was working on just to go somewhere for you. You're making my life difficult, do you know that? :) |
| Javian |
02/20/06 - 11:13AM |
1: Tumbling Down |
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Wow. Very nicely written. I love how you've portrayed Faith's character.
My suggestion for a title would be "Falling" except that's kind of obvious and not very creative, but I'm sure you'll come up with a title.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the title suggestion. Cheers. |
| Beer Good |
02/20/06 - 03:52AM |
1: Tumbling Down |
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I ramble and forget what I was saying. Two things: loved the idea that the First doesn't want Faith dead since that would just call another Slayer. And title... spontaneous: how about "Recalling"? As in Faith remembering everything she's done, as in her plan to have someone else called, as in her being brought back into the gang despite herself... dunno how good that is, but it's one idea.
Author's Response: Thanks. Almost went with yours but then I was reading a story by nwhepcat in which Jenga is described and then I thought Perfect! Not sure how that will carry on to subsequent chapters now that I'm expanding it, but I'll try to work it in. |
| Beer Good |
02/20/06 - 03:46AM |
1: Tumbling Down |
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As with all your stuff, I really loved this. (Even if I didn't think Season 7 was THAT bad.) The tale of Faith's struggle for redemption can never be told enough times (working on a missing scene series myself, I was afraid you'd pre-empted it, but you went a slightly different route...) Anyway, I'm rambling, so cutting it short: this was great and keep cranking these out, because I really enjoy reading them.
Author's Response: Glad I haven't stolen your thunder in any way. Looking forward to your version. |
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