Reviews for Apparition 2 - the shadow of Deeth
| always angel |
05/22/06 - 09:11PM |
5: 5: One of those Xander headaches |
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I'm glad you decided to stick with this one. I really like Deeth.
Author's Response: Deeth is fun to write. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
05/22/06 - 09:36AM |
5: 5: One of those Xander headaches |
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He' Back! But I just said I missed him to spare you feeling. He suck! (I'm kidding) Anyway good so far. You never gace me an glad you alive party. Funny.
Author's Response: Thanks i forgot how much i enjoyed writing for Deeth. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
05/22/06 - 08:12AM |
4: 4: Death is after you |
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Deeth is back, yay! "You kinda died on purpose." Love the whole tone of this. Deeth really isn't all that awe-inspiring, for a reaper. I like him.
Author's Response: Yeah deeth is sought of the anti reaper. as for the rewrite i could make the new story line work with the original idea plus people missed deeth so that's why i switched back. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
02/08/06 - 09:10PM |
3: 3: Really, Really Fast |
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When we gonna find out why they want Xan?
Author's Response: Soon. The mayor will explain why he needs Xander essence. Thanks for reviewing |
| twinblade |
01/31/06 - 05:34AM |
2: 2: Don’t like dead Xander |
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Yes Willow corporeal people are more cuddly in general. You captured (early) Willow perfectly with those lines. Good work.
Author's Response: Aside from Xander willow is one of my favorite characters to write. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
01/30/06 - 03:20AM |
2: 2: Don’t like dead Xander |
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Yay! Sequel! Deeth... there's something very Terry Pratchett about this. Which is a compliment. And now the Mayor too! Any good story needs extra Mayor. And great use of the Xander Harolds thing too... was that the inspiration for the story?
Author's Response: No actually i thought of using the Xander Harolds joke at the last minute. thanks for the terry pratchett compliment he's one of my favorite Authors. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
01/29/06 - 11:12PM |
2: 2: Don’t like dead Xander |
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Good first two chapters. Deeth is funny. But I thought only people that were going to die could see the reaper? Does this mean Willow is going to die too?
Author's Response: The only reason willow saw Deeth was the fact that he came to apologise not actually claim anybody. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/29/06 - 08:25PM |
2: 2: Don’t like dead Xander |
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So the Mayor wants Xander hu. Well maybe well, see Beth again? Good job.
Author's Response: Maybe. I'm not giving anything away. thanks for reviewing |
| michebabyblue |
01/29/06 - 06:18PM |
1: 1: I am Deeth! |
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Hey cool the whole deeth and harolds thing ver amusing. Poor X he never seems to catch a break does he.
Author's Response: the harold's joke came from the last chapter of apparition 1 as for Deeth joke that came to me while i was planing it out in my head. bad things are gonna happen to Xander and this time it's worse. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
01/28/06 - 08:05PM |
1: 1: I am Deeth! |
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Deeth, Hu? Poor Xander has to suffer some more. Good start.
Author's Response: His troubles are only beginning . . . again. thanks for reviewing |
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