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Reviews for Blessing, to a Cruse.




BelovedSlayer 06/16/06 - 06:35PM 4: Step Mother. Signed
ok i read the last three chapters and their awesome but at the same time its kinda unrealistic that alot of the characters have to hide their real feelings by beating the crap out of each other constantly and by saying fuck this or fuck that just too many times for my count. But if you're just starting writing fan fics, you will write better and keep an eye on alot of the spelling and grammar mistakes you fic has as i mentioned before. Please don't take the criticism personally. i only hope that it will help you become a better writer in time. But other than that, im looking forward to reading the next chapter

Author's Response: First I misspelled those words on purpose, cause that's how I roll Ha ha! As far as crusing Alley's the only one that really does. What can I say, she's white trash. I'm trying to make hher as unlikeable as I can, and then later see if I can get people to like her. It's weird I know. A lot of her problems are her fault, because of her temper. She's not a hero. But maybe she can learn to be

BelovedSlayer 06/16/06 - 04:04PM 1: Intro. Signed
I'm just starting to read into the first chapter and so far i really like where this is going so far. I'm especially happy that Angelus is involved in this fic as well and its good to see another Slayer as the main character instead of Buffy or Faith. One thing though. How did Angel lose his soul again to become Angelus? i hope you will add that in a future chapter soon. So far i really like it but just be careful with some of the spelling and grammar errors. i will review the other chapters as well

dutchgirl 06/03/06 - 12:57AM 4: Step Mother. Signed
Great new chapter, it's well written. Things are moving forward in a great direction wich I think i'm going to like very much! Keep it up, please!! : )

filmtheory 05/15/06 - 07:09PM 3: Like Father, like son. Signed
Calista Flockhart- Bwah ha ha ha ha!!! I definitely see the resemblance. I love the back and forth between Connor and Alicia. Is that sexual tension? Cuz I’m pretty sure it is. I love Alicia’s rough home life and Connor’s bad temper and inner-conflict. They make for such a great story. As for Dawn, Gunn, and Kennedy . . . WOW!!! And as for the ending . . . Grrrr . . . you and your infernal cliffhanger.

Psyche2 02/22/06 - 01:59PM 1: Intro. Signed
This is good. I can't wait to read the next chapters!

Beer Good 01/28/06 - 09:55AM 2: Part one. Signed
I do still like Ally - as a character; yeah, she's a bitca, but those are always more interesting than the goody-two-shoes. And she obviously has her reasons to be bitchy. And I actually feel halfway sorry for Connor, which is saying a lot considering I usually hate him... I like the hint that some of the old gang are still alive, hope to see what's happened to them and how they're not coping.

filmtheory 01/27/06 - 02:09AM 2: Part one. Signed
Another good chapter. The ending was very ominous. I like Connor's inner conflict, but ultimate resolve, over the issue of Angelus. Ally and the personal drama was a nice change of pace from the action. You're really putting together a good story.

filmtheory 01/27/06 - 02:03AM 1: Intro. Signed
I love that you set the story in the future, yet still have the old characters of Angelus, Dru, Connor, and Wood. I also lie thatyou added new characters, most notably Alicia. You have a great set up, which makes for a promising story.

Beer Good 01/24/06 - 07:43AM 1: Intro. Signed
Nice start - I like Ally. Obviously, having thousands of slayers all over the world must make it a bit more difficult to motivate the ones who don't want to be one... And like the others, I hope we get some back story - after all, the scoobies would only be in their early thirties, so if they're not around any more it would be nice (though not necessarily necessary) to know what happened... especially to Angel, of course.

Author's Response: Some of them, are around. Some are not. that's all I'm saying right now. So you like Ally, hu. You may change your mind, once you see what a bitch she is. Thanks for reviewing.

Timan 01/24/06 - 05:55AM 1: Intro. Signed
great start. love the slayer with attitude. I'm interested in how angel lost his soul this time. good job

dutchgirl 01/24/06 - 05:49AM 1: Intro. Signed
Interesting storyline! I like it! Hope you update soon.

twinblade 01/24/06 - 05:42AM 1: Intro. Signed
So far so good. I second Axel's question.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'll get into that later. Thanks.

axel 01/23/06 - 10:53PM 1: Intro. Signed
I like it so far. But I'm wondering how he lost his soul, this time.






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