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Reviews for She Don't Know She's Beautiful




Beer Good 03/16/06 - 06:52AM 3: Dressed In White Signed
I really like the set-up of this, with the ending (?) first and then what lead up to it... I'm a little bit confused though as to exactly how AU it is - if Faith is out of jail and Doyle is alive? But the characterizations are great, and I hope you write more of this!

Author's Response: I'm ganna say this story is extreamly AU to a tee. And I couldn't leave Doyle dead, he's just so awsem! And trust me I will be writing more of this..thanks so much for the kind words and the review :D made my day

Ksue 03/14/06 - 06:25PM 3: Dressed In White Signed
Love it love it love it! But one thing that keeps making me confused for just a second is the way you spell Lorne's name. You add an extra E. Anyway, love, blah blah blah. Same as my first. Update soon.

Author's Response: I fixed Lorne's name, thanks for pointing that out to me, I let you know when I get the next update out. Thanks so much for your encouraging words.

Ksue 02/21/06 - 09:51AM 1: She Don't Know She's Beautiful Signed
Ah! Ye Gads! I love it. I hate to admit it, but Angelus is hot. Almost hotter than Angel, and to have you talk about every moment of him sketcing Fred was beautiful. Although, I'm a little more than pissed that he killed Fred. Anyway, great job. And, the second chapter was wonderful. I love that someone made Wesley finally take the plunge and pop the question. It's about damn time. Keep up the WONDERFUL work and please update soon.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the review and positivism, It makes us writers in general happy when we get such good reviews..and yeah Angelus is way sexy, especially in all that leathe ^_^

Beer Good 01/17/06 - 03:04AM 1: She Don't Know She's Beautiful Signed
Excellent little character sketch (if you'll pardon the pun). Only - is Angelus really unimaginative enough to repeat himself like this? Then again, if it worked for him once, why not use it again... I really enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: Thankyou for the complement. To answer your question, I know that Angelus had done this with Jenny, and sketched Buffy before, But I am going to try to make this different, This little story is going to be a series of short stories....when I post the rest later you'll see why I needed this artistic repetitivness :P So keep tuned :D
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