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Reviews for Fallen from Grace.




Peaches Girl 02/20/06 - 09:54PM 5: Puppy Love. Signed
Oh no, poor Oz. I feel so bad for him. He cant keep a girl happy for nothing. Great chapter. Love the work.

Peaches Girl 02/20/06 - 09:04PM 2: Uncle Charlie's House of Pain. Signed
Yes, I agree with you, Rob Zombie for Uncle Charlie. Great chapter, I love what you are doing.

redmoon 02/17/06 - 12:10PM 8: I hung my Head. Signed
Wow. One of your best yet. With Zeke's parts in previous episodes you've probably been sitting on this one for a while - bravo, flawlessly pulled off. I also appreciated the warning at the beginning. Keep up the excellent character development!

Beer Good 02/17/06 - 08:56AM 8: I hung my Head. Signed
Johnny.

Cash.

Fucking.

ROCKS.

There. Just needed to say that. Great chapter. Poor Wednesday... This could shake her up quite a bit, I guess. And Oz is pulled back in again...

twinblade 02/17/06 - 08:15AM 8: I hung my Head. Signed
Damn.

twinblade 02/17/06 - 08:06AM 6: Unfaded. Signed
You did a great job writing Spike and Gunn. I can't wait to see what happens with Sara. Even if all she is is a friend for 'Wednesday' considering the wierdness they see that is impressive. Well now I read the next chapter

Timan 02/17/06 - 05:12AM 8: I hung my Head. Signed
Man i feel so sorry for Skyler losing both of her best friends on the same day. good on Oz for doing the right thing in the end. great job

redmoon 02/07/06 - 03:49PM 6: Unfaded. Signed
NICE! Too much fun to count, and I love the Serenity references. Too bad that Oz seems to be out of the picture: he didn't even get the girl. Personally, I think he and "Wednesday" should get together. Either that or Skyler and Kennedy should have a drunken fling. (Just trying to spice things up) But seriously, awsome episode and now we find out a bit more about Nicadimus - ha! stuck in Pylea, they deserve it. Also: I'm impressed that Wednesday (I love that nickname, as well as Christina Ricci) managed to conjure a vortex on her first day as a witch. Well done. If she has any problems... don't send her to a coven in England: send her to Tibet! All the cool people with problems go to Tibet. I can't wait to read the next episode. Oh, yeah - you made a PG-13 version of the episode! You're the king!!

Author's Response: Thanks, but I don't know why I'm the king, because I did a PG13, and an NC17. I just though people cloud read the one, they wanted to. (By the way, so far 17 people have read the NC17, and 3 have read the PG13. I guess your all, as big a bunch of perves, as me!) Is Skyler played by Christina Ricci? Sure, why not. But she is 17, so we may have to wait, for any drunken flings with Kennedy, or Oz. (Or will we?") And Oz will be back, soon. And don't worry, is additude won't last. I just think everyone needs to be an asshole, sometime. As far as Tibet goes. Maybe. But then it's one thing to write someone you've seen on TV, and another to write someone writen. And I wouldn't want to ruin Loik (I'm guessing that's what you mean.) But hey, you never know.

Author's Response: You know, now that I think about it. Maybe having Oz, hook up, with the underaged Skyler, would make a good story. (The scandal!) Then maybe when She gets a little older, (if the serise is still going, by then) And the shock value is gone, she could have an affair, with Kennedy. Hum. Not saying I'm going to do that, but never know.

Beer Good 02/07/06 - 04:01AM 6: Unfaded. Signed
I think I counted at least two "Serenity" references in there, so I'm happy! And Kennedy still has the hots somewhat for Faith, which is a good twist-in-waiting... As for Spike and Gunn, I thought you did a good job. Gunn is tricky to write, I know. Oh, and sending them to Pylea - good one. Hope Numfar kicks their asses. :-)

Author's Response: Believe it, or not I didn't really watch Firefly (I mean, it was on Fox, so I iknew, it'd be canceled, in two weeks, HA!) But I did see Serenity, and though it was great. It had the second best dialoge, of any movie, that year. (best was The Devils Rejects. In my oppinion.) So yeah, I did some references here. Thanks for reading.

Timan 02/07/06 - 03:55AM 6: Unfaded. Signed
Great chapter. love the twist that Angel gets visions. Also loved the idea that Skyler is dabbling in magic now. this series is great keep it up

Author's Response: Well I can't take credit, for Angel's visions (remember, Cordy gave him, her visions. He said it was a one time thing, But I dout it.) And yeah, Skyler is getting her own powers (Let's just hope, she doesn't go all Willow, on us, and try to kill, everyone). Thanks.

Sinister 02/06/06 - 11:46PM 6: Unfaded. Signed
I think you did a great job. The only complaint I have is that you made a LOT of grammer mistakes. Usually I don't even care about stuff like that cuz I'm a horrible speller myself but it wasn't just spelling. It a little difficult to read with all the mistakes. Other then that the content itself was awesome. I love that Spike and Gunn showed up their amazing characters. I also like that you put Faith and Gunn together for a little fun time...I always thought they'd be cute together (In fact I put those two together in my story, The Second Generation.) I also really like Faith and Spike together too (I also put them together in my story, Coming Together.) I think you made the right choice though putting her with Gunn. Oz was a little harsh to Skyler though I hope he gets his act together soon. I also enjoyed the fact that Skyler is getting into the magics...that should make things interesting. Very funny having the baddies sent to Pillea too...that was funny lol. I was really sad to see Spike and Gunn go though. I was hoping they were going to stay in the series as regulars. Also a very nice twist at the end with Angel being alive. I can't wait to see why they didn't tell Faith. They better have a really good reason. Anyway I think this is the longest review I've ever written so sorry about that lol. There was just so much stuff I wanted to comment on. Anyway great job and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry about the spelling. See I've had some writers block, with this, so when I finnaly finnished, I just put it up, without proff reading it. I've went back, and fixed most of it (I think) I put Gunn, with Faith, for three reasons. ! Faith hasn't gotten laid, the whole seires, and that's just wrong! @ When Faith was on Angel, I though she, and Gunn had very good chemistry, in there few sencen. Spike, and Gunn may become regulars, later on. But I wanted to see, how people liked them, first. (Or maybe They could get a spin off? Hum.) But I though it was clear, why they didn't tell them. Angel doesn't want to put them, in more danger, than he has too. Anyway Thanks.

Sinister 01/23/06 - 06:49PM 1: Signed
Haha...awesome. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I love Spike and Gunn. This should be good.

Sinister 01/23/06 - 06:42PM 5: Puppy Love. Signed
Great chapter! I loved that you braught back dog girl...nice work. Poor Oz though. I kinda saw Liz leaving though. It just wasn't a good place for her and you've gotta have Oz in the group. Now he has no excuse. Get back in there boy. Great work.

redmoon 01/23/06 - 04:21PM 5: Puppy Love. Signed
Ha! Awsome episode!! And I'm not just saying that... well you know why. I really do appreciate your praises and you nailed Loki as the "asshole" we love to hate. And you got Jade in there too! Oz certainly gets around. I wonder if Jade plays for the other team now too? I really do feel sorry for dogboy. He never gets a break. Then again, the club wouldn't be the same without him. I hope Veruca comes back so he can follow up on his promises. There's something to be said for good old-school skape goating. Keep it up!!!

Author's Response: Jade, and Kennedy are secretly dating. Just kidding. I guess you'd have to answer, that question. And I'm glad, you like it, since I used your work. As for Veruca, I was going to have Nagima, turn her, into a mouse, and feed her to a snake. But I couldn't do it. So she may be back. Thanks.

Beer Good 01/23/06 - 07:42AM 5: Puppy Love. Signed
Awww. Poor Oz. He and Kennedy should spend some time bonding - she could practice throwing stakes, and Dogboy could fetch them. And good idea bringing Veruca in - I always did think that was a bit of a plot hole, that Oz could kill her simply by biting her. (Maybe he has silver fillings in his teeth?)

Author's Response: "Get it, boy," HA! That's a funny image. I'm glad you like Veruca. I really wanted to use her again, but the whole dead, thing was a problem. But then I reallised, Hey, he didn't use silver. So I took the ball, and ran with it. Thanks.

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