Reviews for Fallen from Grace.
| Sinister |
03/21/06 - 11:16PM |
10: The B*#ch is back, part 2. |
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| Awesome chapter! I love the line in the beginning when Skyler tries to think of something to say, "you broke a crayon when you were little." hahaha I love it! I too am very anxious to find out who this biker guy is. He showed up just in the nick of time. Can't wait to read more...excellent work as always! |
| Angels Shadow |
03/21/06 - 04:59PM |
2: Uncle Charlie's House of Pain. |
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| I know its been awhile since I had the chance to read & review, but I really enjoyed this story, so I'm happy to have the chance to read it again. Again, great chapter, intense, and the ending was neat - perfect ending for the chapter. |
| Beer Good |
03/17/06 - 04:03AM |
11: Hate Everything About you. |
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| So the big question becomes: will Faith find faith in Faith, and if so, will she do it with Oz, Kenn and Skyler or with these new people? Oh, and great banter between Oz and Kennedy. "At least I never drove anyone to the other team!" |
| redmoon |
03/16/06 - 08:22PM |
11: Hate Everything About you. |
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| "Hey, I got your papa smurf right here." That's the magic of context. Faith's in the dog house, while Oz is back in the fold: I like it. So Faith's the new Champion, eh? Fun. I like the new band of good guys in black - it's good to have allies who just pop up (with guns on motorcycles), but Nicademus is coming back! Update soon! |
| Timan |
03/16/06 - 02:49PM |
11: Hate Everything About you. |
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| Fantastic. loved the idea that Oz and Kennedy were forced to work together and i cant wait to find out what those three people want with faith. good job |
| redmoon |
03/13/06 - 07:33PM |
10: The B*#ch is back, part 2. |
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I want to say Wicked, but I'm afraid it's not retro enough yet. I love the Lost Art of Torture scene and poor Wednesday! All her school chums are either dead or in jail and all she needs is to have every bone in her body broken! This gang needs another whipping-child. I hope the long haired biker shows up again - just in the nick of time to blow somebody's head off (hopefully not Skyler's). But WHO IS HE?? I like the Beer Good theory, but you seem to have refuted that. If you happen to have long hair and ride a motorcycle, you could be working youself into the fic, maybe as an answer to that one challenge. If so, you're very prompt. Kennedy has visions now! Maybe the PTB realized Skyler "wasn't long for this world," so to speak, and decided to shift her powers to someone a little more permanent. Great episode and opens all kinds of new possibilities for character development: i.e. is Oz back and is Faith out?? Update soon!
Author's Response: Faith's not out, but it's going to be akward, to say the least. Oz is back in, even if he dosen't know it, yet. I will start going a little easier on Skyler (at least for a wile) The Biker's not me. (Although I do have long, headbanger hair). And he will show up soon. Oh and Kenny's vision, How do you know, it was from the powers? (MA HA HA HA!) Thanks. |
| Timan |
03/13/06 - 05:56AM |
10: The B*#ch is back, part 2. |
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well done i hope to god the other will stop long enough for Faith to explain everything. I'm putting in my vote that the man on the motorcycle is Beer Good i think he should be in every story. great job
Author's Response: The man on the bike is not, REPEAT NOT Beer Good. Thanks for reading. |
| Beer Good |
03/13/06 - 04:40AM |
10: The B*#ch is back, part 2. |
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Sucks to be Faith. Great chapter - "Seeing dead relatives", great line. And the scene between Faith and the Mayor was just... I love those two together. Gotta say though, isn't evil Faith a little TOO evil? No matter, there's great continuity here, and I'm intrigued who's the guy on the motorbike is... unless it's me again :-)
Author's Response: Faith too evil? Well, maybe. See people know I love Faith, and I thought They may expect me to be a little to nice, about making her evil. SO a may have gone overboard, trying to prove them wrong. But remember she'd just leard the Mayor was dead, and we also saw how much he meant to her. So that's why she was a little extra crazy. Thanks. |
| redmoon |
02/27/06 - 01:59PM |
9: The B*#ch is Back. part 1. |
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| Sweet! Cliffhanger ending! Faith (the good one) should just tell Willow what she wanted to know - after all, there was that body-switching spell that happened, so maybe they'd all believe her. Maybe she'd even take the opportunity to give the Scoobies some inside information on the Mayor... Skyler sure is taking a beating. Somehow I don't think a little crayon-breakey speach between Wednesday and evilFaith is going to do it... Update soon! |
| Sinister |
02/27/06 - 12:52PM |
9: The B*#ch is Back. part 1. |
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| Awesome job! I really love this series its amazing. Bringing back evil Faith was an awesome idea and I can't wait to see whats going to happen. Excellent job! |
| twinblade |
02/27/06 - 08:50AM |
9: The B*#ch is Back. part 1. |
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| Awsome and spooky at the same time. I look forward to the next epp. |
| Timan |
02/27/06 - 06:48AM |
9: The B*#ch is Back. part 1. |
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| holy crap! when you said evil you really meant evil. poor Skyler i hope the others can save her soon. good job |
| Beer Good |
02/27/06 - 04:30AM |
9: The B*#ch is Back. part 1. |
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| OK, that was just evil. Poor Faith... really good as always though. So what's up with Skyler's mom, huh? Guess you'll tell us eventually... |
| Sinister |
02/27/06 - 12:10AM |
8: I hung my Head. |
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| Wow! That was a really powerful episode. I have a feeling this is really going to hit Skyler hard. The poor thing is prolly going to think it's her falt for not calling the cops sooner or something. This was a great chapter. Very nice work! |
| Peaches Girl |
02/20/06 - 10:26PM |
8: I hung my Head. |
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| I love this fic. You rock my friend. I wanted to tell you that I like how you wrote Gunn and Spike they were great. I also liked how you thru Angel in there at the last minute. I am happy that Oz is back to being a good guy. I just love OZ. |
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