Reviews for Fallen from Grace.
| redmoon |
05/02/06 - 06:07PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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Apple Dumpling gang, ha! I like it. I think being decapitated is something that could get even the most tight lipped of us a little vocal. Just wondering (not really important) is Oz still wolfy, or is it human-Oz head which is talking. Does wolfy Oz even talk? Hm. Anyway, enough about that. Great job, and I hope you update soon (and repost, not just "edit" - I hate looking through the old end of the list). Good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, everyone wanted a name, so I picked the worst possible one HA HA HA! I'm kidding, that's not the name. (Or is it?) Oh, and Oz's head is normal. But he can talk, in wolf form. I thought I'd made that clear, before, but I guess not. Sorry though, I will just edit it. But all you have to do, is go to the part that says, ACT 3. That's not so bad, is it? Thanks for reviewing, everybody. |
| Sinister |
05/01/06 - 02:50PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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| Great work as always! I'm glad Oz is...ok...I guess thats what you would call him. I loved Kennedy, "calm down Oz your getting out of character again," lol that was priceless. Can't wait to read more! |
| Sinister |
05/01/06 - 02:35PM |
13: WHen A Stranger Calls. |
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| Holy shit! Oz better not be dead although I don't know how he could come back from this. This is getting very very interesting. |
| Timan |
05/01/06 - 08:20AM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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| great start so far you really got me interested in what is happening. i like the part with Oz being body-less and grumpy. I'm very interested in what Maggie saw i know how hard it is to write for psychics because of Heidi but you have doe exceptionally well. great job i cant wait to read the end of it. |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
05/01/06 - 07:34AM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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| Hey, this is looking interesting! |
| Hellsbuttmonkey |
04/19/06 - 01:04PM |
4: Normal Life. |
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| Hey good work for this one! Keep it up! |
| redmoon |
04/17/06 - 01:45PM |
13: WHen A Stranger Calls. |
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"You're not legal." That was awsome. I finally get how Ken had the vision. It all makes sense (more or less) to me now. I hope Oz isn't really dead, or maybe Nagima turns good and can bring him back. Anything is possible, keep it up!
Author's Response: Nagima good? Did you miss the part where she was going to steal Skyler's mpower (and kill her, in the prossces?) If anything she's going to get worse. But she does hate Nicadimas, with good reason. But they need each other. As far as Oz goes, silver wasn't used on him, so he may not be dead. But then lossing your head's hard to come back from, even for a werewolf. Thanks. |
| Beer Good |
04/17/06 - 06:07AM |
13: WHen A Stranger Calls. |
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| You ripped Joss's head off, you bastard! Oh, and something else... what was it... YOU KILLED OZ! Or did you? No silver bullets, but no head either... um... confused now. But happy. Great story. And the James gang on the Slayers' side too. Like this. |
| Sinister |
04/07/06 - 03:54AM |
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| Very interesting but slightly confusing. Can't wait to see where your going to go with this! |
| redmoon |
04/06/06 - 11:10PM |
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| Cool! Is this part of an episode or a stand-alone act? Light-being is back, I like it. TBC? Better be! Update soon! |
| Sinister |
04/05/06 - 09:16PM |
12: JACKED! |
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Another awesome chapter as always! I can't even tell you how much I love this series. Your ideas are awesome and you should really think about writing for tv shows as a career...seriously. There's so much I want to comment on but I don't wanna make this too too long. I like that Kelly is starting to not be a bitch...it was an unexpected but good surprise. I also liked that Skyler's principle is Snyder's brother but he was a little too harsh...even for a brother of Snyder. I'm also loving Jesse and I can't wait to find out more about him and his gang. Like I said...nots more I'd like to comment on but I don't wanna make this a novel lol. Great job as always and I can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words (the check's in the mail.) Yes Kelly's getting better. Being close to death, can make you want to live diffrently. And Jesse gang will step out soon. |
| Timan |
04/05/06 - 09:49AM |
12: JACKED! |
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great chapter. it's good to see Skyler and Faith begin to patch things up. i loved the fact that you gave oz all these references that the others don't understand. I'm am seriously intrigued who this Jesse and his friends are and why they want Faith. good job
Author's Response: Thanks. But I just realised I f*#ked up, eith the Oz thing. He wasn't there for Riley's thing ether! Sorry. |
| Beer Good |
04/04/06 - 03:23AM |
12: JACKED! |
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Priest a hair band? Um, yeah. Check out the long hair on Rob Halford. Anyway, another great chapter, with both arc-y goodness and some more insight into Skyler's personal life... man, fortune really has it in for that girl. I liked Oz a lot in this chapter, too, both the music banter and the stuff about why they have to have a name...
Author's Response: Yeah, I never like the term "Hair Band" It laps a lot of bands together, that are not the same (Guns, N Roses are NOT the same kind of Music, as Nelson!) Thanks. |
| redmoon |
04/03/06 - 11:20PM |
12: JACKED! |
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Loved the musical banter. Skyler sure does hold a grudge, doesn't she? It's like you can't nearly torture somone to death anymore without them getting all offended! I liked the comparison at the end: "we're not cops", then Jesse kills the bad guy. I hope those guys don't turn out to be puppet-masters who think the Fab Four should be doing some kind of "plan," and then turning on them when they don't. Allies you don't know you have are actually a novelty, I'm realizing. Kinda nice to have. Keep it up!!
Author's Response: Puppet Masters? (No coment) |
| Sinister |
03/21/06 - 11:49PM |
11: Hate Everything About you. |
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Another awesome chapter! I too enjoyed the banter between Faith and Oz although I couldn't help but feel like Oz was a little out of character (considering his trade mark stoasisum)...still I loved it! I can't wait to see what the deal is with these people and I hope that Faith gets her faith back in herself. Nice work and I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Hey, let's face it. Oz was just Willow's boy friend on the show. Now he's a major character. Which means he has to come out of his sell, just a little. Sometimes developing a character means taking them out of character. Besides He was pissed. Thanks. Oh and I think you meant Kenny, and Oz, not Faith, and Oz.
Author's Response: Hey, let's face it. Oz was just Willow's boy friend on the show. Now he's a major character. Which means he has to come out of his sell, just a little. Sometimes developing a character means taking them out of character. Besides He was pissed. Thanks. Oh and I think you meant Kenny, and Oz, not Faith, and Oz. |
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