Reviews for Fallen from Grace.
| Sinister |
07/01/06 - 11:23AM |
17: Attack Of The Killer Bunnies! |
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| Haha! Nice work as always. It's always good to have a little comidy in there to break up the story and the Anya's fear of Bunnies thing was always priceless so this was great to read lol. Keep up the good work! |
| redmoon |
06/12/06 - 09:23AM |
17: Attack Of The Killer Bunnies! |
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| Great Lines:
AXEL.
I'm speechless.
TIMAN.
Thank God.
ANYA.
You feel pretty dumb now, don't you?
Let's see... you referenced Mars Attacks with the music, Shawn of the Dead with the hoards (you were just missing a cricket bat), Monty Python with the killer bunnies... Any bad creature feature with the lab testing etc. and it was funny as hell. "I'M NOT CHAVES!!!!!" Well done! |
| Beer Good |
06/12/06 - 03:42AM |
17: Attack Of The Killer Bunnies! |
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| That was dumb, silly, and absolutely genius. I think I bust something from laughing so hard. |
| BelovedSlayer |
06/12/06 - 12:27AM |
1: Welcome to the Team. |
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Right now i just read the very first chapter of this and its pretty awesome so far. the best part i think is that this takes place in Faith's point of view and all that. Faith might be mad but i can't think of why she would kick Giles in the balls lol. i really like that you introduced Skyler though cause quickly she is turning out to be one of my fave characters here and its good to see Oz as well. i still have a long way to go with reading this but your doing awesome so far. try to be careful with the spelling errors though cause there is sure alot of them lol please update asap!!
Author's Response: It's funny, you say you haven't read this before, but when it was up the first time (I actedently deleted the first version) You revied the first chapter, and you left almost the same, word for word review HA! As far as Faith kicking Giles in the ball, I think that's in character for her, plus she was pissed (NOTE My story Slave To The Dark, takes place one year before this, and covers Faith leaving, as well as what happened with Tara) Thanks. |
| Beer Good |
06/01/06 - 02:06PM |
15: Like Sunnydale, with Guns. |
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| Great work with Willow - loved the little thing about Oz's hair. But shouldn't Skyler simply quit the evil-fighting business and set up a muffin shop? |
| Beer Good |
06/01/06 - 01:59PM |
16: Commercial Break. |
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| Good one. But shouldn't wolfy Oz be a spokesperson for Gillette? |
| Timan |
05/31/06 - 11:05PM |
16: Commercial Break. |
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| For some reason i want to eat a snickers and i don't know why good job |
| Sinister |
05/31/06 - 01:00PM |
16: Commercial Break. |
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| Haha! Good one! |
| Sinister |
05/31/06 - 12:56PM |
15: Like Sunnydale, with Guns. |
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| Very interesting. I love that Willow was in this and that one of the bad guys finally was dusted and that Jesse was the one doing the dusting. Also interesting stuff about Tara that I didn't know lol. I'm guess that would be the stuff that was a spoiler from another of your stories. I'm really gonna have to check that one out. Anyway great work as always. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| redmoon |
05/29/06 - 12:47PM |
16: Commercial Break. |
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| "Okay, is this really about the hoards of vampires trying to kill us, or are we all just a little grumpy cause we're hungry?" Very nice! And I like the name the Fallen Gang. Very appropriate. |
| twinblade |
05/29/06 - 05:53AM |
16: Commercial Break. |
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Very, very cute. I'm still enjoying this story.
Author's Response: CUTE!!!!!! It's not supposed to be Cute! Man, that baby's all ready watered you down! (Just kidding) Thanks. |
| Beer Good |
05/09/06 - 02:59AM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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You actually used the muffin thing! Brilliant! I thought you were just recycling the joke at first, and then... hey, so does this mean Skyler was actually awake in Biology, since she knows about ants? And "HEY! I MIGHT NEED THOSE!" Perfect. Now let's see, who could help them... hmmm...
Author's Response: Skyler's actualy kind of brainy, she just doesn't want anyone to know it (Wouldn't fit her image, and all) Thanks. |
| Sinister |
05/08/06 - 11:34PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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Awesome ending! The muffin thing was a nice touch lol. This is getting very interesting and I hope that the powerful person Kennedy knows that can help Oz and Maggie is who I think it is =) That will make for a very interesting chapter...can't wait for an update. Great work as always!
Author's Response: Ok, your right, the person Kenny knows is Andrew, I can't trick you. Thanks. |
| redmoon |
05/08/06 - 10:29PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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Haha, Death by Muffins. Classic. I like how it actually was useful with the ants and all. Poor Oz. I guess it makes sense that he has a silver bullet. I'm surprised he hadn't told anyone about it earlier (as it's useless if no one but him knows). So the glowey being is Jehovah, eh? Interesting. I wonder what the black idol is - and if the person who can help Maggie and Oz is who I think she is. Upsate soon!
Author's Response: The Light being (Samual), is NOT Jehovah, he just repesents him. And Oz hadn't told anyone about the bullet, because he was saving it for Veruca. He's not suicidal. Thanks. |
| Timan |
05/08/06 - 09:00PM |
14: The Wolf Pack. |
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The divine one huh? sounds like a cool central character for a story. great end i cant way to see where that lead or if Meggy gonna be okay. good job
Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't resist. (I'm just waiting for Beccy, or Nighthawk to beat up a vamp, named Axel. Who's Meggy though. Or did you mean Maggie? I don't know if she'll be Ok. I feel like I should kill someone. But I can't bring myself to Kill Skyler. People got upset when they thought I might kill Kenny (which was a shock, since people hate her) They'd kill me, if I killed Oz. And Faith, not going to happen. But Maggie, may be in trouble. Oh, and I;ve given enough clues, about who Nicky really is, is you know what to look for. Thanks. |
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