Reviews for Slave to the Dark.
| MonsieurRipper |
07/18/06 - 12:23AM |
5: Remember me? |
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Oh my now that's a twist! + Achilles, nice touch. Can't wait to see how that affects things. One question though, I'm not familiar with Angel. I thought the Immortal was a vampire. What is he, or do we not know?
Author's Response: You ndon't know Angel! LOSER! Just kidding. But You should check it out, if you can. Cause in some ways it was a good show. Very diffrent from Buffy, but the same, at the same time. As for the Immortal They never said what he was, just immortal. and he was never seen on camera. That's why I wanted to devolpe him a little. Thanks. |
| sugarmouse |
07/17/06 - 11:56AM |
7: Keep You're Friends Close. |
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| ah ha......that kind of explains why Giles is being such a *******! now i REALLY wanna kill him lol!!! great chappy ......plz plz plz update soon! |
| MonsieurRipper |
07/17/06 - 03:33AM |
4: Attack the Root. |
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I just read the first 4 chapters, and I need to go get some sleep before work!
Anyways, I really like this plot. It's very original. I haven't read Fallen From Grace yet, but I'm starting to get excited to do so.
I've always had a thing for stories involving Cannibalism. *cough*Hannibal & Anne Rice novels*cough*
Also, you portray the characters quite nicely. I hope I get to see more of Faith in this story.
K, last thing I promise! Really really good job on Willow and Kennedy's relationship. I thought that was done with surprising accuracy!
Author's Response: Wait, aren't you the one that hates Kenny. If you think I was acurate, that may not be a good thing. Ha, just kidding. I tried to stay as close as I could, wuth them. But I liked Kenny, so I hope I didn;t make her unlikable. I always thought that could have been a fun relationship, if it had time to develop, which it didn't on the show. It could have seen a type of loving teasing, that wouldn't have worked, with Tara. (What are you talking about Axel?) Moving on Faith wasn't going to be in the rest of this, since at the begining of Fallen (In which Faith is the star) , I said Faith had been gone, for a year. but I just figured a way, to have her in it, if only for a wile. Thanks. |
| twinblade |
06/14/06 - 01:31PM |
6: Love Hurts. |
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I have been reading this and "fallen..." and I think I missed something. Who is Xander "with?" Good job by the way.
Author's Response: Xander's with Andrew. (Just kiding.) I haven't gotten to that point in the story yet. I hope to have another chapter up soon. But I'm having writers block with it. Stay tuned, and thanks. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
05/25/06 - 02:56PM |
6: Love Hurts. |
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| That was awesome. I love how you've incorperated the Greek legends and mythology into this story. You did a great job with giving the Immortal a background and some great quotes between him and Buffy. |
| Spicule |
04/23/06 - 10:04PM |
6: Love Hurts. |
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--So did you know Hercules?"
--"He was a pompous ass. He was a daddy's boy, all the way."
I love all the connections to historical events and heroes, it really adds to the creative aspect of the story (which, by the way, is verry good!) Yeah, so keep it up.
Author's Response: I always wondered why nobody uses The Immortal, in stories, unless it's to bash him (Though I understand why they bash him) But it's a golden chance to be creative. Nothing is known about him, so you can do anything. At first he wasn't going to be Achillies, just someone made the same way. But then I thought, why not? Thanks for reading. |
| sugarmouse |
04/23/06 - 08:35AM |
6: Love Hurts. |
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hey, i've only just come across this story, i think it's great! :-) The guy who eats people is freaky and he makes an awesome baddy! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. By the way, The Bad Guys (Simon) is a character from my frist stoy, South Of Heaven. I'm reusing him here. |
| Angels Shadow |
03/23/06 - 05:21PM |
2: The New Covenet. |
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| Wow, totally creepy ... in a good way, of course. As for Giles, what an ass. Though I could kinda see him being corrupted by power ... like the whole Ripper thing ... so yeah, I can see that. Hey, but again, really good - it'll be interesting to see how Buffy, Xander, etc. will deal with Giles' power trip. |
| Angels Shadow |
03/23/06 - 05:08PM |
1: It begins. |
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| I think its really great you decided to write a prequel. The first chapter was interesting, especially starting out with Faith and Giles arguing. Oh, and the part with Xander was cute. So yeah, I'm really excited to see where you take this. |
| Timan |
03/21/06 - 06:23AM |
5: Remember me? |
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| Tara's back! this is gonna be interesting. what is willow going to do. great job keep it up. |
| Beer Good |
03/21/06 - 03:50AM |
5: Remember me? |
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| Aaaaand there she is. Oh this is so good. And Achilles? You're really mixing it up! I love watching how this plays out, even if I know in broad strokes how it's going to end... at least I think so. |
| Beer Good |
03/02/06 - 03:39AM |
4: Attack the Root. |
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| "Eating people? Where does that get fun?" Creeepy. I've been meaning to read this, and just read all four chapters in a row... great mixture of horror and old-time Buffyisms (Richard Gere? Hilarious!) even if I'd agree with previous posters that Giles seems a bit out of character... but I like this, and it'll be interesting to see how you get from here to "Fallen From Grace". |
| Timan |
02/22/06 - 06:53AM |
2: The New Covenet. |
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| Nasty. who every this demon is he's playing for keeps. So faiths going to New Mexico wonder what's going to happen there. good job |
| redmoon |
02/21/06 - 10:45PM |
4: Attack the Root. |
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This is a wicked and admittedly kinda nasty story. Scene of butler announcing 'dinner' - ew. Girl in the restaurant trying to shed the pounds - also ew. I've obviously been keeping up with my Fallen From Grace so I won't ruin anything, but but I love your character development and the entire plot is great! I'd thought about it, but you make a lot of sense making the Scythe the target of an attack. Keep it up! (both of them!)
Author's Response: Thanks. I got the idea about the scythe, form Timan's Hell On Earth seirse. (Though it's a little difrent here.) And yes, it's a nasty story. I'm morbidly fasinated by cults, exspecialy one that involve canibalism. (what vthe hell, make you want to eat someone, anyway?) Thanks. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
02/02/06 - 08:17PM |
3: True Meaning of Heaven. |
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I really like this story! The way you developed Giles' character was awesome, kind of like Ripper. I can't wait to see if the episode with Faith about Angel will be played out more. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks. The Faith thing will be played out, just not in this story. This is one year, before my Fallen from Grace (a Faith seirse) story. I should warn you, before you read it. It spoils some of this story (in fact, you learn who the hooded figuer is, in the first chapter. You've been warned!) |
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