Reviews for The Second Generation
| Angels Shadow |
01/11/06 - 04:46PM |
7: LA |
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Wonderful as always! I enjoyed the addition of Lorne and his reading the girls. All I gotta say though is that with eight pregnant women, these guys are in for one heck of ride!! I absolutely love it, and I'm anxious to see how everyone copes with this situation.
Author's Response: Haha...yea the boys are in for some...interesting times for sure. As always thanks so much for reviewing and I'm so glad your enjoying the story. |
| Angels Shadow |
01/10/06 - 05:07PM |
6: Working Together |
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Fantastic - I absolutely loved how you worked in that part with Spike at the end. I can't wait to see what happens with that! And of course, Buffy and Angel were so cute :) Hey, again, I can't tell you enough - fabulous story, and I totally love it!
Author's Response: As always...thank you so much for your kind words and again...it's good to have you back. Thanks again. |
| Angels Shadow |
01/10/06 - 04:58PM |
5: The Eighth Mother |
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I had a feeling it was going to be Faith, and I'm so glad it was!! She's such a great character and always seems to add a whole new dimension to the story. Each chapter just keeps getting better. I am so hooked!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Again...just like with Spike I just love Faith's character and I just couldn't leave her out. Plus I thought that especially with her in The Eight all of them will make for interestingly different mothers. As always thanks so much for reviewing. |
| Angels Shadow |
01/09/06 - 05:29PM |
4: Now What? |
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Again wonderful. That part at the end with Spike was nicely done - I really liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just couldn't do a story without Spike. I just love that little vampire lol. Thanks as always for reviewing. |
| Angels Shadow |
01/09/06 - 05:24PM |
3: The Prophecy |
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This is absolutely fantastic!!! I loved when Cordy's like "oh great, so Fred and I are each pregnant with 4 babies?" I don't know, it just made me laugh lots :) And the prophecy sounds really interesting, I can't wait to find out more about it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure if that line was going to come off as funny or just laim. I'm glad to know that it was funny lol. As for the prophecy I hope it's working well to explain the story because I started this story with the idea of the girls all being pregnant at the same time and I went for the prophecy to try and explain why lol. Anyway thanks a bunch for the review as always. |
| Angels Shadow |
01/09/06 - 05:18PM |
2: The News |
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Lovely!! Anya is such a hoot! I can't wait to find out what's going on! Truly, I love all of your stories, and this one is already becoming one of my favorites :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad your loving it. It's so much to write because I'm trying to put a big mix of emotions in this one...happiness, saddness, angst, comidy and some others. As always thanks so much for reviewing. |
| Psyche2 |
01/08/06 - 06:31PM |
10: What's In A Name? |
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This is awesome. I like what you did with the names that was funny. Oooh Connor! Can't wait to see where that goes!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you liked it. I just couldn't resist with the name thing I thought it would just be too funny and I couldn't wait to see who would pick up on it. And yes Connor...I know a lot of people didn't really like him and I must agree he was a little brat but I still love him. I pretty much loved all the characters of both shows which is pretty much why I always end up having like a million characters in my stories lol. anyway enough of my rambling. As always thanks so much for reviewing. |
| Angel_Forever |
01/07/06 - 10:23PM |
1: Prologue |
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Good chappie. Is Spike going to try to win Buffy over or is he just there to get some respect? Update really soon!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it. And to answer your question its a little bit of both. He's in love with Buffy and he got his soul back for her but he also wants to treated with a little more respect and now that he has a soul he hopes that he will be. Thanks again for the review. |
| Psyche2 |
01/06/06 - 09:33PM |
9: Check Up |
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Lol! Theres a tie...this is awesome!! I can't wait for the rest!!
Author's Response: Lol thanks! I'm glad you liked that line. I always like to throw in a little funniness into my stories. Makes things more interesting. Thanks again for the review. |
| Psyche2 |
01/06/06 - 09:16PM |
8: Comforting |
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Okay I'll agree with you on the sappiness but it was good. I love how everyone's looking out for eachother. And especially Buffy and Angel I can't wait to see where that goes. I love where this is going and can't wait to read the next chapters. This is great!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad your liking it. And I'm glad the sappiness was a good kind of sappiness. As always thanks for reviewing. |
| Beer Good |
01/06/06 - 02:06AM |
9: Check Up |
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Just read this all the way through, and I think it's great. It's a pretty original plot, and... oh, what else... oh, I really liked the little speech about Faith being the one with strength. And Faith and Gunn possibly getting together is a given. Just don't put Cordelia in bed with Lorne. :-) Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you decided to read the story. I liked the Faith speech too I just had to put it in. I always thought that Faith was just kind of lost before and even though she was evil for a while I always loved her character and knew she could change. As for Cordelia and Lorne...don't worry about me putting them together lol. Lorne's going to be more like the funny looking uncle lol. Thanks again for the review. |
| axel |
01/06/06 - 01:26AM |
9: Check Up |
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Four of each. Good job, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought that might be a little too perdictable so I was going to make it uneven but I really liked the idea of four of each so I just went for it. |
| axel |
01/06/06 - 01:06AM |
8: Comforting |
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Yeah, that was sappy, but in a good way. And I like the Idea of Faith, and Gunn (They had chemistry, in the fewq sences they had, on Angel) I wanted to put them together in one of my stories, but haven't been able to yet. So I'm glad you did this. One thing though(an it's just me being picky) But what the HELL was Loren thinking? He was going to give alcohol, to a PREGNENT WOMAN? What a dumbass! (Sorry, of point) Anyway good job.
Author's Response: Hahaha...I didn't even think about that...opps. I guess Lorne just umm...forgot for a second lol. Don't worry though he was just saying that, he didn't really get her a sea breeze lol. I'm glad your liking Faith and Gunn. I too think that they have great chemistry. Right now their just friends but who knows whats in store for the future. Thanks again for the review. |
| Wonkabar |
01/05/06 - 10:34PM |
9: Check Up |
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Awww! That was a cute chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I hope to update again today sometime after work. I'm really getting into the story. |
| Angel_Forever |
01/05/06 - 10:26PM |
1: Prologue |
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I love this! They're all so happy. Could you please keep it that way? I know that isn't really a great adventure but they were never this happy on the show. Please? Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm so glad your liking it. I also enjoy the happiness but your right...it doesn't make for a very good adventure if everything stays super happy so I'm going to have throw some twists and turns in but I promise they wont be too terrible. Thanks so much again for the review. |
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