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Beer Good 02/01/06 - 04:28PM 17: Time Signed
Yowza... cliffhanger it is. Well done sneaking that in there, I've been wondering when we would be seeing a Big Bad here. So who are they? Hoping for a new chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad your enjoying it. I know the bad guys came a little late but better late then never right? Anyway I'll try and update as soon as I can I've already started working on the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

Psyche2 01/31/06 - 06:15PM 17: Time Signed
Omg...cliffhanger, in a way. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I just love those little cliffhangers. Its a nice little invention for keeping the readers into the story lol. Anyway I'm glad to hear that your still enjoying the story. I'll try and update as soon as I can and thanks as always for your kind reviews.

Angels Shadow 01/31/06 - 04:54PM 14: An Offer He Can't Refuse Signed
I loved it!! That conversation with Spike and Buffy made the chapter. It was so sad and yet so right. Everything that Spike said was perfect, and I was so happy to see him say it. Again, fantastic - it just keeps getting better and better!

Author's Response: Thanks! You have no idea how much it means to me to hear such a talinted writer say such kind words. I just felt it was very nesessary for Spike and Buffy to have a little talk. I didn't want this story to focus a lot on the love triange that Buffy, Spike and Angel had so I had to sever the ties that Buffy and Spike had together. Its so comforting to know that I did a good job. Thanks you much for your kind words their much apresiated.

Angels Shadow 01/31/06 - 04:42PM 13: Finding Connor Signed
Again, great chapter! Very intense, and I loved the suspense at the end. I also love that Spike wasn't the one to announced he had a soul and that Angel figured it out. It just wouldn't be in Spike's character to blurt something like that out, so you handled it very well.

Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you agree. I figured that Spike is just the type that would never tell if it came down to it. If you really think about it he never really told Buffy. He was insain and she figured it out. He just isn't the type who would tell. As always thanks so much for the kind review.

michebabyblue 01/31/06 - 02:38PM 17: Time Signed
Yay ne chappie, excellent, but those evil doctors should not underestimate the woman, and trying to get rid of those men hahhah. can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Yeah the doctors do have the upper hand since all of the girls and the guys trust them. I mean its their doctors...how could they not? But your right they are underestimating the girls and the guys. They were just talking about taking the guys out if its nessisary. I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens though. I don't wanna give anything away. Anyway as always thank you so much for reviewing.

BloodThirstyGoddess 01/31/06 - 02:09PM 17: Time Signed
Oh, thats so sad, stupid evil doctors! Great chapter, can't wait to find out what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm also glad you hate the evil doctors...that's what I was going for lol. I'll try and update soon but I just got back to college recently so I don't have too much time on my hands. Thanks again for reviewing.

Angels Shadow 01/30/06 - 04:49PM 12: Help Signed
Wow - that twist at the end was really great!! I never saw that coming, and now I can't wait to find out more about the big bad. Plus Spike going to them for help and none of them knowing yet that he has his soul - awesome!! One of the best chapters so far, I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you liked it. I figured that Spike really isn't the type of guy to just blurt it out like that. He's the type that would tell them on his own time if he tells them at all. As always thank you so much for reviewing and I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Angels Shadow 01/30/06 - 04:39PM 11: Talking Signed
Wonderful chapter - I adored the interaction between Buffy and Angel, though of course they both have to say what they think the other wants to hear. It can never be easy for them, can it?? lol - anyway, great chapter. I also enjoyed the part with Spike, especially his realization that he saved Connor because it was the right thing to do, not because he was trying to impress anyone. That in itself shows such a huge leap forward for his character, and I was so glad to see it :)

Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you liked it. I just felt that after that much time together it was time for Buffy and Angel to have a talk but no...it never can be easy for them and thats what I was trying to capture. I was really hoping that people would enjoy Spike's realization because I really felt it was nessisary for him to become more independed as a character and to try and get him away from Buffy a little more. I really did think their relationship was interesting but I'm a B/A shipper to the max lol. Anyway as always thank you so much for reviewing and I'm so glad to know your enjoying this story.

Psyche2 01/26/06 - 02:37PM 16: Give The Soul Life Signed
Holy smokes! One cliffhanger after the other.......Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol...I'll take that as a compliment. Thanks for the review and I'll try my best to get the next chapter up ASAP but it's kind of a busy week. Anyway thanks again.

axel 01/24/06 - 08:32PM 14: An Offer He Can't Refuse Signed
Poor Spike. Mabey he'll get lucky, some day. Good Job.

Author's Response: Don't worry Spike will get himself some loving in the near future I believe. I would never have him be alone. He deserves someone. Thanks for the review.

BloodThirstyGoddess 01/24/06 - 07:43PM 16: Give The Soul Life Signed
That was REALLY great! OMG- it was so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it and I hope you continue to enjoy it.

michebabyblue 01/24/06 - 07:15PM 16: Give The Soul Life Signed
OH MY GODDESS all I can say. Wow great amazing wow

Author's Response: Wow thanks! I don't think I've ever gotten an 'OH MY GODDESS' or something similar to that before. You put a giant smile on my face! =) Thanks again for the review.

Beer Good 01/24/06 - 02:43AM 15: A Present Signed
OK, I think I've figured out what that spell's about... great cliffhanger, though. It would have been nice to see more of Willow and Tara's wedding... and I'm still waiting for this to go truly NC-17, haha... but otherwise, it's all good and I'm looking forward to seeing when the ladies start a-poppin' - and what happens to Angel, obviously.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yea I kind of wanted to have a little more on Willow and Tara's wedding but I've actually been going pretty slow with this fic since its supposed to be about the scoobies having babies and it's 15 chapters in and no one has had any lol. I just figured that people might start to think it was moving too slow I skipped over some things like Willow and Tara's wedding. Also I usually jus put NC-17 for most of my fics as a just in case. I'll try and live up to its expectations but I really just have it there for safety lol. Anyway thanks so much again for reviewing and I hope you continue reading.

michebabyblue 01/24/06 - 01:46AM 15: A Present Signed
Dam u know how to put a girl in suspence. This was one rocking chapter, I wonder if this gift has anything to do with Buff. Guess I'll just have to wait and see.

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad I could keep you in suspence I just love doing that lol. Anyway you'll get to see if your guess is right or wrong soon enough because today is my day off of work and I plan to write, read, and relax all damn day. I love it lol. Anyway thanks for the review.

Psyche2 01/22/06 - 06:59PM 14: An Offer He Can't Refuse Signed
Wow, I like how you did that. This is great...I can't wait for another update!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I'll try and update soon.

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