Reviews for The Second Generation
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
07/25/06 - 02:32PM |
24: Baby Alex |
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I'm so happy you updated! I also liked how Wes took charge as he was able to knock out the nurse it really showed how he grew up and was important to the team. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'll try and keep up better with my updates...I seem to have a problem with that lately lol. Thanks again for the review! |
| Beer Good |
07/25/06 - 01:34AM |
24: Baby Alex |
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I like how Wesley punches out the doctor right away, while the supposedly mean street fighter Gunn fusses about hitting a woman... I mean, I don't advocate hitting women, but it's a nice little Wes moment. Don't mess with Wes. Glad you've updated!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that part. This chapter was kind of a big 'Wesley taking charge' chapter. I didn't even really mean for it to come out that way but I'm kind of glad it did. Ever since Wes has been on Angel he's actually turned out to be a damn good leader and I wanted to capitalise on that. Plus I also wanted to show a softer side of Gunn. He's always the tough guy but deep down he's still a gentleman who thinks twice about hitting a lady. Wesley on the other hand knew what had to be done and took care of business lol. Thanks for the review! |
| Nicky |
06/11/06 - 07:02PM |
23: Reunited |
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are you still alive? just kidding...waiting for you to write more thats all. lol.
Author's Response: Hey there! Yeah I'm still alive lol. To tell the truth I've started getting really busy with school and then when college let out of the summer I took a little break from pretty much everything and bumbed around the house for a while just watching tv and my Buffy and Angel DVD's of course lol. Anyway I finally started writing some again but I've been working on these two other idea's I've had and I guess I've been kind of neglecting my old stuff that's unfinished. But knowing that there's still people out there that are waiting for more gets me more motivated for sure. I'll def try and get my ass moving and update soon. Thanks so much for stickin with me it means a lot. |
| axel |
04/18/06 - 09:37PM |
19: Missing |
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Good work. Sorry I haven't kept up, with this. New Job, and all. Poor Buffy. The Doctors better be gone, before the drugs wear off.
Author's Response: Thanks! And don't worry about not keeping up. I'm probably going to be falling behind with your story too unfortanitly. I hate it but I have sooooo much work to do for school right now that not only do I don't have time to update my own stories but I don't even have time to read some of my favorites like your Faith series. =( It makes me a very unhappy camper. Anyway thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the other chapters you havn't gotten to yet. Take your time though because unfortanitly it's going to be a while before I can update again. Hope you enjoy and thanks again for the review! |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
04/13/06 - 05:08PM |
23: Reunited |
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OMG that chapter was so sweet and cute! I also loved how you brought Angel and Spike together to actually get along. I was totally shocked at the end of the chapter! Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I haven't had much time to update recently but I'm hoping to find the time soon so I don't leave you guys hanging for too too long. As always thanks so much for reviewing! |
| Angels Shadow |
03/25/06 - 10:15AM |
23: Reunited |
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That chapter was so sweet and touching - seeing everyone reunited with their children. That was a great moment for everyone. But oh my God - poor Anya!! I can't believe it - that was a really great twist there, and I didn't see that one coming. I mean, I figured they weren't out of the woods yet, but thats horrible what they're going to do. As always, I love it. This chapter was probably my favorite so far :) Keep up the great work, and, now that I've caught up with the story, I really hope you'll update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you've finally had the chance to catch up to the story so your right there along with everyone else. I'm also glad to know that this is one of your favorite chapters. I would have thought people wouldn't like it as much because of the lack of action but it's good to know that you enjoyed it. I must admit though I just had to throw in that little twist at the end. Like you said...they're not out of the woods yet. Thanks so much for always reviewing and I'll try to update soon. |
| Angels Shadow |
03/25/06 - 10:05AM |
22: Fighting Back |
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That's so great that Giles didn't fall for that trick - I really enjoyed that scene. I'm really loving this story, and I love the part with Spike and Angel at the end - stupid doctors :) I can't wait to see what happens next - really intense chapter there, especially at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I just love to make stuff intence and keep people guessing. Its good to know I've been doing a good job of it. As always thank you so much for reviewing it always means a lot. |
| Angels Shadow |
03/23/06 - 05:35PM |
21: Backup |
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woo-hoo!! Go Angel and Spike - showing that doctor who's boss and finding the babies!! Course though, I know it isn't going to be that easy for the gang ... it never is! Again great chapter, everything just reads really well and it moves quickly. Again, I love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad your enjoying it! I was worried that everything was moving too slow so I'm glad that you said it moves quickly. Your really starting to catch up on the story and thats awesome! As always thanks for the review! |
| Peaches Girl |
03/22/06 - 11:13PM |
23: Reunited |
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Awe, they got the babies back. But poor Xander, he's always the one getting kicked around. Anya needs to call to Willow and quick. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yea I felt bad because Xander is always the one that gets wailed on. "I'm sick of being everyons butt monkey!" I just love Xander quotes lol. Anyways as always thank you so much for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. |
| Angels Shadow |
03/22/06 - 07:25PM |
20: I Promise |
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Loved the chapter! The intensity is really picking up. I keep sitting here trying to figure out whats going to happen next, what the doctors are up to, but I admit, I'm completely stumped - and thats a good thing!! I hate stories where the plot is pretty predictable - so not the case here, and I'm loving it. I can't wait to find out whats going on!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that this isn't one of those stories when the plot is predictable because I agree...I hate those too! As always thank you so much for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! |
| Nicky |
03/22/06 - 03:06PM |
23: Reunited |
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this was great, really. they got to actually meet their babies. So cute. But as always on BtVS or Angel, there has to be some big bad thing happening right after. Great work!! Cant wait to read another!!! Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yea it just wouldn't be right if the chapter was completely happy with all smiles. I had throw in something at the end. As always thank you so much for reviewing! |
| DarkProtector |
03/22/06 - 01:09PM |
23: Reunited |
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You've done it again. I loved the twist at the end. No more shadow games it's all out war now. YAY
Author's Response: Haha thanks! I'm glad you liked the ending. I was debatting weather or not to put that in there but I was pretty happy with my decision. As always thanks a lot for reviewing! |
| Beer Good |
03/22/06 - 03:30AM |
23: Reunited |
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And the gloves are off. Yikes, that last bit caught me a bit by surprise. Still really good though, keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was thinking about letting this chapter just be a nice happy one full of smiles and thanks but then it just wouldn't be very fitting for Btvs and Ats lol. I'm gald your enjoying the story and thanks, as always, for reviewing! |
| Angels Shadow |
03/20/06 - 05:33PM |
19: Missing |
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Again, excellent chapter. I love how the suspense is buidling, and I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a really addictive story, and I'm loving every minute of it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that its considered an addictive story, I just love that. As always thank you thank you thank you for reviewing. |
| Psyche2 |
03/20/06 - 05:33PM |
22: Fighting Back |
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I love the update! I understand that your busy, so am I., just please update soon!! This is great!!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad your enjoying it! I will try and update as soon as I get the chance. It's you guys who review that keep me updating faster though. Whenever I think "should I do this or should I write my stories?" I usually go for the writing because I hate to keep you guys waiting. Thanks again as always for reviewing and I hope to see a new chapter of Make It Better soon (I love that story). |
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