Reviews for Whisky Worse
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12/12/05 - 03:39AM |
1: Whisky Worse |
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This was a lot of fun, and I really like how you mixed the smut (which is good) without really letting go of the characters, and even used it to explain why everyone dispersed to different parts of the world... some really good dialogue in there too. "No 'doing that' girl. And no 'doing' that girl either." (One thing though, which looks like nitpicking but as a Scotch drinker I have to say it: there's no such thing as Scotch whiskey. There's Scotch whisky and Irish/American whiskey.) Otherwise, good job!
Author's Response: OMG! I knew that about the whisky/whiskey thing, but I just forgot. I should go in there and change that... Thanks for pointing out the faux pas and thanks for liking it. |
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