Reviews for Big Sister
| axel |
01/30/06 - 06:24PM |
5: Graduation, Part Two |
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| Great Chapter. I think your doing Faith well. I want to see where this goes. |
| Monkey Pants |
12/16/05 - 09:49AM |
5: Graduation, Part Two |
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Great chapter! So many things happened. i liked the way that Buffy's coma was the motivation behind their attack, and that Angel comforted Faith and spoke to the Mayor. The Devon part was funny, but i was a little sad he died.That's it! I'm adding this to favourites :)
Author's Response: Aw, I made the favorites list! Go me! Glad you liked the chapter. And of course, thanks for R&R-ing. |
| Angels Shadow |
12/02/05 - 06:58PM |
5: Graduation, Part Two |
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As always, fabulous update!! I really enjoyed seeing how this all played out with Buffy out of the picture. You did a fantastic job with the battle scene, and I love the doubt Faith is having about what she did - should be interesting to see how that plays out ... and if Angel will try to help her deal. Definitely hoping for an update soon :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm glad to hear that my Faith portrayal is working out; I've been a bit nervous about writing for her, especially since this period in time is a very complicated one for her. I've begun the next chapter, and I hope to finish it within the next two weeks.... |
| slayerfest |
11/26/05 - 02:25PM |
5: Graduation, Part Two |
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Lovely. You may not like to write battle scenes, but you did a good job of focusing on people while the battle was going on; we're seeing Faith while the Mayor leads into the school instead of watching Angel run through it. Again, I say lovely. The only thing you might change is that you need to put more emphasis on the Mayor following Angel into the school. The first time I read this it was totally lost on me. Anyway, this is very very good and I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Ha, the reason I focus on people while the battle is going on is because then I don't have to really write about the battle. It didn't occur to me that people might not notice that one sentence about the Mayor following Angel...but then, I knew what was going on, so it's hard for me to judge.... |
| Psyche2 |
11/24/05 - 08:19PM |
5: Graduation, Part Two |
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Great chapter...and yes Happy Thanksgiving...I am American (and a proud one at that!). I can't wait for the update!! Its so good, can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: I really wanted to update on Thanksgiving just so I could quote Pangs! I hope to get the next chapter out faster than this one. I have this idea in my head that I hope is as cool as it seems in my head.... |
| Beer Good |
11/24/05 - 04:56PM |
5: Graduation, Part Two |
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Whoah, you, like, killed Devon! That was cool. (Sorry.) Anyway, another good chapter. I like the way you portray Faith, not TOO repentant, but not necessarily evil all the way through either... I wouldn't have minded seeing some more scenes from the battle, but what's there is really good. Hope you have time to update again in the not-too-distant-future, I've been missing this fic...
Author's Response: Well, I had to kill somebody, and I thought people might hate me if I killed Xander, so it was either Devon or Jonathon....But anyway, thanks! I don't really like writing battle scenes, so I pretty much just did the essential parts. |
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