Reviews for Apparition
| littlewiccan |
11/26/05 - 02:01PM |
7: 7: Ghost camp pt 2 |
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Okay now I really want to know why Beth is hanging aropund the hellmouth so much? Is she evil? Oh well update ASAP please. It was very good by the way.
Author's Response: All will be revealed in time. i am going to be going through Beth's backstory throughout the fic. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/26/05 - 01:06AM |
7: 7: Ghost camp pt 2 |
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ok now you have to update asap so I can find out about Beth.
Author's Response: Will do. I'm going to be dealing with a lot of Beth's back-story throughout the fic. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/25/05 - 06:32PM |
7: 7: Ghost camp pt 2 |
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I like it. It's like the lost boys, with ghost. I really want to know what Beths up to. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Will do. you'll find out about beth a lot more as the story goes on. |
| always angel |
11/24/05 - 12:01AM |
6: 6: Ghost camp pt 1 |
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Great chapter.
Author's Response: thanks |
| axel |
11/23/05 - 11:38PM |
6: 6: Ghost camp pt 1 |
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Good stuff. Keep it up, and can Beth show me the advanced stuff, some time (evil grin)
Author's Response: I'm going to pretend i didn't hear that. as for the advance stuff your gonna learn exactly what ghosts can do. thanks for reviewing. |
| spikes girl |
11/23/05 - 11:22PM |
6: 6: Ghost camp pt 1 |
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i love this beth character. she's got spunk! and xander is so adorable, great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. |
| littlewiccan |
11/23/05 - 10:22AM |
5: 5: A girl named Beth |
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Very nice....I like the Beth character. Awesome job. Can't wait to see what happens next and what happened to Xander's body.
Author's Response: Thanks Beth was very fun to write and you'll find out what happened to Xanders body in later chapters. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
11/23/05 - 03:38AM |
5: 5: A girl named Beth |
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To quote the wisdom of Homer Simpson: "Don't hassle the dead, boy. They have eeerie powers." Glad to see the scoobies are finally catching up... this is shaping up to a really good story.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'm in the process of working what Xander and the other ghosts can do. Thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/23/05 - 03:01AM |
5: 5: A girl named Beth |
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This fic isn't going to have an ending where ghost Xander gets his body back is it? Update soon I wanna see what Xander can do..
Author's Response: What? do you think I'm gonna make it that obvious *Quickly scribbles out notes*. as for Xanders powers I'm putting the finishing touches on them right now. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/23/05 - 12:49AM |
5: 5: A girl named Beth |
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Good chapter, Beth's a cool character. The line about Giles free time, HA!
Author's Response: Beth was fun to write. I'm going to be working on two main story lines in this fic. one involving the mystery around Xanders body and the other being Xanders life as a ghost. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/22/05 - 01:14AM |
4: 4: We are gathered here . . . |
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What the hell happened to Xander?
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. all I'll say is it's gonna be creepy. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/20/05 - 10:10PM |
4: 4: We are gathered here . . . |
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Intresting devolpement. This should be good. By the way, why did no one else notice him (can only the scoobies see him?) anyway Good Job.
Author's Response: No everybody can that's why I place him up the back of the church. By the time they were gathered around the coffin most people were leaving, also, I forgot about. As for the mystery there is so many ways I can make Xander go 'I'm a ghost this sucks'. Thanks for reviewing. |
| littlewiccan |
11/20/05 - 07:26PM |
4: 4: We are gathered here . . . |
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Okay that was sad but really good. Can't wait to find out what happens next. I really wanna know what happned to Xander and why the scoobies didn't realize it wasn't him before.
Author's Response: I felt that making fun of the funeral was in poor taste so i kept it as serious as i could. also this fic needed more then Xander walking around saying "I'm a ghost, this sucks". Thanks for reviewing |
| littlewiccan |
11/20/05 - 07:12PM |
3: 3: Xander the annoying ghost |
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I really like this there were definetly some great lines but too many to write down. I liked the bit about Xander popping in on WIllow in the show. lol It is awesome so far. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Will do. have to warn you the next chapter is a little sad and kinda spooky. Thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/19/05 - 01:32PM |
3: 3: Xander the annoying ghost |
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Poor Xander, he has it rough. Maybe hell get some ghost loving soon?Good job.
Author's Response: it's not the best feeling in the world to wake up dead let alone be stuck awake 24 7. thanks for reviewing |
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