Reviews for Apparition
| axel |
12/11/05 - 07:43PM |
13: 13: More better |
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Oh Spike won't play with me. I need my girlfriend to beat him up HA HA! Good stuff. Poor Will. She did love Xander. But she get's over that later anyway. Good job.
Author's Response: it's going to be interesting to see where Willow and Beth's relationship will lead to. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/10/05 - 01:23AM |
13: 13: More better |
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Spike is too funny. I'm glad you put him in this.Gee,I wonder why Willow doesn't like Beth. Xander's dumb it should be obvious. Great chapter. Hope you have more soon.
Author's Response: It should be obvious but in series 2 he never realised so it seems quite natural. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
12/05/05 - 03:58AM |
12: 12: All things Beth |
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It IS more complex. We look at asses too, remember? (Sorry.) Anyway, keep going!
Author's Response: hey if i had to list everything we look at this chapter would go on forever. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/05/05 - 12:40AM |
12: 12: All things Beth |
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Oh no, Poor Xander. Just when things were looking up. Good job.
Author's Response: yep there is definitely fog covering the light at the end of the tunnel. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/04/05 - 11:36PM |
12: 12: All things Beth |
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Uh-oh that can't be good.
Author's Response: no it can't be. things are definitely gonna heat up. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
12/02/05 - 05:18PM |
11: 11: Dis information |
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Will Beth, and Xander work it out, stay tuned? You've done a great jod on the new characters There so intresting that I almost don't care about the Scoobies (almost) Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot i try to make diverse characters as much as possible. plus, with this fic, I'm actually writing two stories at once which is a great challenge. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
12/02/05 - 12:27AM |
11: 11: Dis information |
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Again with the cliffhangers! Arg! Great chapter. But if you don't update soon I'll have to kick your butt or something!
Author's Response: Whoa! hey! easy there missy. did i hear a please in there somewhere? ; ) thanks for reviewing. |
| Sinister |
12/01/05 - 09:14PM |
2: 2: A funny thing happened . . . |
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Cool chapter and very funny. It's kind of weird though that Buffy and Willow don't really seem to care. I hope theres a reason for that later cuz I can't imagine them acting like this. Also...probs on the Xander being able to kick ass thing...very fun.
Author's Response: it's not that they don't care it's more the fact that it's still a major shock for them and they are both not one hundred percent sure it's him. thanks for reviewing |
| axel |
11/30/05 - 03:51PM |
10: 10: The showroom floor |
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RUN XANDR RUN! Good Job.
Author's Response: thnaks. |
| always angel |
11/30/05 - 12:40AM |
10: 10: The showroom floor |
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uh-oh Xander's in trouble!
Author's Response: Yes he is. Never mess with a necromancer. thanks for reviewing |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 12:33AM |
9: 9: Something on you mind? |
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The whole storing people thing reminds me of Blade Trinity. Good chapter. Update soon
Author's Response: it does doesn't it. how ever the reason they are stored is entirely different. thanks for reviewing |
| Sinister |
11/27/05 - 10:32PM |
1: 1: Uh . . . Xander |
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Good stuff. I like where your going with this. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: It's going to get weirder i can tell you that. |
| axel |
11/27/05 - 10:10PM |
9: 9: Something on you mind? |
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Poor Xander, he just has no luck with women. Maybe That'll change. Good job.
Author's Response: i think it might if he never uses the Twinkie analogy again. thanks for reviewing. |
| littlewiccan |
11/27/05 - 07:59AM |
8: 8: The mystery machine |
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Okay now I really want to know what's going on. Excellent as always. Update soon.
Author's Response: Will do. thanks for reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/27/05 - 01:57AM |
8: 8: The mystery machine |
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so the demon was trying to do something with Xander's soul..or something that had him out of his body and while he was out Beth stole his body b/c shes been watching him and wanted him to be her new boy toy..right?
Author's Response: Nope keep guessing. thanks for reviewing |
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