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Sinister 02/01/06 - 09:37AM 5: 5: A girl named Beth Signed
Great chapter. I really like Beth she seems cool. I can't wait to see what she's going to show Xander and I'm very interested to find out what happened to Xander's real body. Great job!

Author's Response: the ghost powers are great but Beth has more on her mind the showing Xander stuff. thanks for reviewing

always angel 01/29/06 - 10:52PM 21: 21: All warm and solidy Signed
Great ending. I'm glad Beth got to cross over and that Xander got his body back.

Author's Response: I thought it was the best way to end it. thanks for reviewing

axel 01/28/06 - 11:35AM 21: 21: All warm and solidy Signed
Ah you killed Beth (well, she was already dead, but you know what I mean) But at least Xander got his body back. Good over all story

Author's Response: Beth didn't die she crossed over once the issue holding her to that plane was resolved. as for Xanders body i wanted him to get it back but not in the way everybody expected. thanks for reviewing

Beer Good 01/28/06 - 09:36AM 21: 21: All warm and solidy Signed
Awwww. A happy ending. I'm not usually a big fan of those, but this fic has been so light-hearted (well... considering the plot) that it works. And "Xander Harolds" - great one. Thanks for writing this, it made me smile and chuckle throughout.

Author's Response: i wanted Xander to get his body back but in a way that nobody expected. and as for "Xander harolds." i had to put in one last joke . I'm glad you enjoyed it the problem for me now is that i have nothing to follow it. Thanks for reviewing

Beer Good 01/28/06 - 04:12AM 20: 20: All good things pt 2 Signed
Aw, you did kill him. Good job. Loved the whole "I want you dead in five minutes" bit... Spike poking Angel (sorry, that sounded less slash-y in my head) and great ending for Beth too. But surely you can't leave Xander like that? After all, if he doesn't get his body back, why doesn't he cross over? There's gotta be something left for him to do... Oh well, it says "Completed: No", so I'll hope for more chapters.

Author's Response: the story ain't done yet. still got one more chapter that's going to round off everything. thanks for reviewing

Beer Good 01/28/06 - 03:23AM 19: 19: All good things pt 1 Signed
"I’m thinking of making a home version but I’m having trouble with the patent.” I'm starting to love Leyland. Too bad you're going to have to kill him... you ARE going to kill him, right? This isn't one of those fics where all our heros die and the bad guy goes "la-di-da-di-da", is it? Oh well. I'll read the next chapter and see.

Author's Response: you do that and tell me what you think as for the patent line i thought it sounded less cliche. thanks for reviewing

axel 01/27/06 - 10:46PM 19: 19: All good things pt 1 Signed
You are evil. But I leard that from Hell on Earth, 1. And it doesn't really matter what Xander decides, because he'll just kill them all, anyway. Good work.

Author's Response: it's good to be bad sometimes and as for Leyland do expect his victory to be that easy. thanks for reviewing

always angel 01/27/06 - 09:49PM 19: 19: All good things pt 1 Signed
You're evil for leaving it like that! Update soon I'm dying to know what he decides.

Author's Response: So leaving a story on a cliff hanger makes people evil huh? i always thought it was something else. thanks for reviewing

always angel 01/22/06 - 11:43PM 18: 18: Doing a job twice Signed
Loved what Spike said at the end. Great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks a lot

Psyche2 01/22/06 - 06:40PM 18: 18: Doing a job twice Signed
This is great. I like what Spike said about being captured and how it foreshadows seaseon five of Angel. I can't wait to see what happens with Buffy. Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: I'm in the home stretch now. sad to say that the fic is nearly finished. thanks for reviewing

Beer Good 01/22/06 - 06:23AM 18: 18: Doing a job twice Signed
“Never catch me being a bloody ghost,” Spike remarked, “just hanging around one place with nothing to do but spy on people . . . unless it was somewhere Angel worked I think I’d enjoy that.” :-D

So is Spike to be trusted this time? Love the way he enjoyed everyone being captured, at the same time that he's justifiably (huh) upset that there's someone more badder than him in town... Keep going, this is great!

Author's Response: i could have enjoyed everybody being captured the way i saw it in my head was that he was shocked that it happened and annoyed that it wasn't him who did it. and i have to say that final spike line was one of the first lines i thought of when i was planing this fic. thanks for reviewing

axel 01/21/06 - 08:51PM 17: 17: Total Focus Signed
Funny stuff. Poor Will's not having an easy time. Though Xander probably is (or was, before they got kidnapped.

Author's Response: Xander was having fun until he realised that he's the only one left free. thanks for reviewing

axel 01/21/06 - 08:44PM 16: 16: Bigger fish Signed
HEY did you just call me a Girl? HA funny (maybe someone should do a story about Angel turning into a girl. It might work.) Good work.

Author's Response: Insecure Angel is almost as fun to write as Irrational Willow. thanks for reviewing

Sinister 01/21/06 - 10:29AM 4: 4: We are gathered here . . . Signed
Wow...very interesting. The funeral was very well writen and very emotional, great job. I can't wait to find out whats going on here. There's so many questions that need to be answered lol. Anyway great job!

Author's Response: thanks a lot i try to keep it as diverse as possible. thanks for reviewing

littlewiccan 01/20/06 - 03:39PM 16: 16: Bigger fish Signed
Hey its kinda likethe necromancer in that Angel episode but not. Love the bit about Angel being a gril. : ) nice work.

Author's Response: I tried to make it different. the angel joke was a last minute thing i thought it worked. thanks for reviewing

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