Reviews for Manchester Prep
| blinddollie |
04/22/06 - 02:36AM |
1: Welcome to Wilkins |
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I am not ashamed to admit, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! They're porn, hardcore BDSM porn, but unlike most stories of this type, THEY HAVE PLOT! THEY FOLLOW A STORYLINE! Bravo, kudos, you are an excellent author & have me drooling for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's so great to have people willing to stand up and say, "I love your hardcore BDSM porn, Terry." I'll keep with the storyline and plot. It'll only get sicker form here, if I can manage that anyway. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
04/15/06 - 06:40AM |
7: Chapter Seven: Katherine |
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Great chapter. I love how you incoprerated Katherine into the Buffyverse to bring out the significance of Manchester Prep from Cruel Intentions.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Katherine is not the *exact* same character as the girl form the film, she's more of an homage. Still, they have a lot in common. Still, 2 points to BloodThirstyGoddess for catching the reference! |
| twinblade |
03/28/06 - 06:31AM |
7: Chapter Seven: Katherine |
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This story is really good. Extremely F__d up but good.
Author's Response: Thanks, man. Good and extreme.ly F____d up was exactly what I was going for. I'm going to try to concentrate a little more on the students than I have been. I have a lot of ideas for them. |
| axel |
12/22/05 - 09:12PM |
6: Chapter Six: Secret Relations |
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Guess Ashly is like her mom, after all, HA! I wonder how Willow's going to like this? Good work.
Author's Response: Ashley is an awful like mom indeed. And I can already tell you that IF she finds out, Willow won't like this at all. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
12/10/05 - 04:15PM |
6: Chapter Six: Secret Relations |
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I loved how you used Scott Hope as the Mayor in that 'position'. Ashley and Connor together, very interesting! Can't wait to see what Angel thinks. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I really wanted to stick it to Scott. And that pun was totally intended. I'm an unrepentant punster. Connor and Ash should make an even sweeter couple than Buffy anbd Spike. |
| always angel |
12/08/05 - 01:07AM |
6: Chapter Six: Secret Relations |
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Ashley really does have a lot in common with her mother. The part with Scott Hope was just disturbing. I hope they get rid of Jarrod soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was pretty obvious Scott Hope was a sicko, so I wanted to put that in there. He's a sick bastard all right. Ash is definitely like mom. And as for Jarrod, well, you'll have to keep reading. |
| axel |
12/03/05 - 08:57PM |
5: Chapter Five: Used |
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poor Angel, He sould his soul to stop Connor from being evil, and now he's worse. Good Job.
Author's Response: Yep, fate can be a primo super bitch sometimes. |
| axel |
12/03/05 - 08:35PM |
4: Chapter Four: Bleed Like Me |
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Damn Gunn seemd to like that just a little to much. Maybe Fred wasn't the cause of the heat between him, and Wes after all.
Author's Response: LOL- now THERE'S a story I should have written. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
12/02/05 - 02:59PM |
5: Chapter Five: Used |
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Great chapter. Lovin' the darkness. If there had been vamps in Cruel Intentions's Manchester Prep, i'm sure something like this story would have happened. As always, please update soon.
Author's Response: Glad ya love the darkness. I certainly love writing it. I actuially have more Manchester Prep/ Cruel Intentions slants to put into it. I'm not trying to do a crossover or anything, but I definitely want to get the feel of the bitchy, back stabbing rich kid high school down a little more. I'll keep updating if you keep reviewing. Your reviews leave me feeling so warm and smiley. Thanks so much! |
| always angel |
12/02/05 - 02:20AM |
5: Chapter Five: Used |
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I gotta say that I hate Nina. Dont know why..I just do. I have a feeling that Connor's protection for Sara is about to run out. Good chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: I'm Nina indifferent, but I see where she can be annoying. But she's a little hottie, so I have ot use her a little bit. Right? Don't fish for spoilers on Connor's protection. Just kidding. I know that's not what you're doing. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will update soon. |
| Beer Good |
11/27/05 - 11:09AM |
4: Chapter Four: Bleed Like Me |
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Mayor Scott Hope? OK, that's probably the sickest thing in the entire story so far. Still like it, keep going! Oh, and let's have Willow torture Connor some more, that's always fun. :-)
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for getting the Scott Hope reference. At first, it was oging to be a throw away, but I actually came up with a whole subplot aorund it. And yeah, it probably will be the sickest thing in the story. Willow torturing Connor is good clean family fun for everyone. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I can promise at least one more bout. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
11/27/05 - 09:57AM |
4: Chapter Four: Bleed Like Me |
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Awesome chapter! Definately darker. Gotta love that. Sucks for Connor and Harmony. Also, the end when the vamp actually kills the other because of Connor was really ironic in a funny way.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad I'm getting down the darkness. The way I see it, given his powers as a human and his lineage (more on that later), Connor is a bad ass vampire- the kind others fear. I'm planning on running with that. |
| Vamp19762000 |
11/27/05 - 01:39AM |
3: Chapter Three: Come Home |
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Very interesting. You know how I LOVE Connor and a vamp Connor is sooo thrilling. I've been patiently waiting for someone to vamp my boy and thank god it was you. You always know how to do the dark stuff right. I hoping to see just a little more detail though. My imagination's good but your style is better.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was so so flattered to see I was on your fav's list! Made my day. As for details, they'll be plenty. Dont' worry. But I figured one segment where I just gave you noises and aftermath might be nice. Thaks so much for reading and for revieing. I've been waiting tfor a vamp Connro too, so I just did it myself. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
11/26/05 - 08:26AM |
3: Chapter Three: Come Home |
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Good chapter, I love all of the character developments and how it brings them all together. It doesn't seem to be quite as dark as Addictions yet but i have no doubts. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thought the incident in theis chapter was pretty dark, but I'm glad you have an appetite for more darkness, because I think I may have abit more coming. |
| axel |
11/25/05 - 06:53PM |
3: Chapter Three: Come Home |
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Good job, And your right, Connor is sick. I'm Glad Dawn's giving Xander a chance. This is Of point, but You've been reading My south of Heaven story, which I orginaly was going to make a lot darker, and more volient, But I toned it down, cause I thought it would be to much. But if you can get away with this, Maybe I'll start doing it the way I meant too (Sorry I'm off point.) Anyway, Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and your agreement on Connor. I always thought D/X would make a great couple, so here I go with them. I'd love to see SOH go darker. |
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