Reviews for ANDREW!! MAN OF ACTION!
| redmoon |
10/31/05 - 01:55PM |
2: Part I: “DEATH HOLDS A LIGHT SABRE!” |
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“Whoa, okay. Using your outdoor voice,” LOL!! This is amazing! Keep it going, okay?
Author's Response: will do. thanks for reviewing |
| Beer Good |
10/31/05 - 04:14AM |
2: Part I: “DEATH HOLDS A LIGHT SABRE!” |
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You know, I always thought phrases like "lol" and "lmao" are often thrown around a bit too much. Does everyone who uses "lol" in a written text actually laugh out loud? That said: LOL, and I do mean literally. Hilarious, and you write Andrew really well... and everyone else is perfect as well, as larger-than-life spy thrillers go. "You guys are the F.O.R.C.E.?" Poor Wilda, and poor me - a couple more chapters like this and I'll probably bust a gut laughing. But I'm willing to make that sacrifice. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. this was just one of these crazy ideas i had floating around my head. Andrew and spy film just seem to go together. thanks for reviewing |
| Wonkabar |
10/30/05 - 09:26PM |
2: Part I: “DEATH HOLDS A LIGHT SABRE!” |
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Oh, boy...this is going to be fun. I just hope they don't try to give Andrew a 'XXX' tatoo on the back of his neck. LOL.
Author's Response: not so much an 'XXX' more a 'C3PO'. thanks for reviewing. |
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