Reviews for A New Dawn
| Kevin |
12/01/05 - 05:43PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Another great chapter. I love the references to thigs that happen in season 7 Buffy and seaosn 4 Angel. Also, I love the sexier version of Dawn.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the kind words, i always thought the TV show didn't do Dawn justice, she acted like qa child cause thats the role the scoobly gang put her in. but now she can hold her own, so it should be interesting
Author's Response: thanks so much for the kind words, i always thought the TV show didn't do Dawn justice, she acted like qa child cause thats the role the scoobly gang put her in. but now she can hold her own, so it should be interesting |
| Sinister |
10/14/05 - 10:48PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Awesome story. It seems a little fast but with some stories thats neccessary so this story could be one of them. Other then that I really like it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: hey thanks, yeah i know i know it was fast in getting rid of will and buffy, it's just that i wanted them out of the picture for the next few chapters so that i could focus on dawn more. and i know they accepted the explaination quickly, but i just felt like i had to much dialogue as it was.
I'm almost done with the 3rd chapter, just having a little trouble with it. though i now have a beta reader, Kevin, who is an auther on the site, so the rest of the chapters should be of better quality. |
| Angels Shadow |
10/10/05 - 06:52AM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Great story so far - have to agree I'm interested to see if Dawn's knowledge will change the future ... should be interesting - keep it coming!
Author's Response: hey thanks. yeah somethings will be different for sure, but i'm not going to give anything away, u'll just have to keep reading |
| Timan |
10/06/05 - 08:21AM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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i love that bad-ass Dawn. glad to see someone taking up my challenge. i'm going to be startiung my piece soon
Author's Response: thanks heaps. i've always wanted to do a dawn centred fic, and your challenge just seemed so perfect. i'll keep an eye out for your new story. |
| Beer Good |
10/06/05 - 04:41AM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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"Something about Cordelia being evil." "I knew it!" Good stuff, it'll be interesting to see just how much Dawn's knowledge will change what will happen... for instance, will Faith be the same Faith if she never fights Angelus? Etc etc... Intriguing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, i like that Cordelia line as well (though i love her character and can't believe she was killed off,) I'm trying to remember the time lines of both shows. since this fic started from the episode "Potential" in buffy, wouldn't that means Angelus would have already made his appearance which means faith has busted out of jail. if someone reads this, please let me know if i'm right cause i don't wanna put the wrong thing in my fic and screw it up. |
| axel |
10/05/05 - 10:04PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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Good stuff, I like the new Dawn character, and it shold be intresting to see where this goes, Keep it up.
Author's Response: Hey thanks, that means a lot especially considering your reviews are kinda known for being 100% up front. Dawn is going to be hanging around for a while so we will get to see just how different she really is in the future, |
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