Reviews for The Right Thing
| littlewiccan |
10/11/05 - 05:39PM |
6: Out of Control |
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| Nice...keep up the good work. |
| Angels Shadow |
10/11/05 - 06:07AM |
6: Out of Control |
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| Fantastic update - poor Spike and Diana! Wonder what Buffy will say to Spike - should be interesting to see how Buffy stays in control and doesn't kick Cordova's butt! Update soon! |
| Angels Shadow |
10/09/05 - 12:57AM |
5: The Fate of the Childe |
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| Awesome update! I hope Diana gets out, or at least gets redemption at some point. And that General Cordova - man, is she a witch! Again, fantastic. Keep it coming :) |
| Angels Shadow |
10/08/05 - 12:44PM |
4: Of Monsters and Men |
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Great update, and I have to agree - Yes! Riley bashing. That guy just plain annoyed me and I hated his relationship with Buffy. I hope Spike gets to kick his butt!! Update soon :)
Author's Response: Yeah, pretty much sure that's gonna happen at some point...lol...glad your're enjoying the story :) Thanks for reviewing, gives me motivation to write more! |
| littlewiccan |
10/08/05 - 11:01AM |
4: Of Monsters and Men |
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| Awesome.....I really like it. Keep up the good work. |
| Beer Good |
10/08/05 - 05:24AM |
4: Of Monsters and Men |
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Yay! Riley bashage! Seriously, as dull as I always found the initiative, this is a good twist. Especially if it ends with Riley in pain. Lots of it. There could be electric shocks involved... sorry, I'm getting off topic. Anyway, do go on!
Author's Response: Riley will definitely get what's coming to him, don't worry! :) Hmm... shocks would be poetic justice.... ;) |
| Angels Shadow |
10/07/05 - 09:58AM |
3: The Vampire's Reflection |
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Awesome story so far - very well written. I can't wait to see what dirty plan the Initiative has going on now ... wonder if the guy Spike doesn't like (general's second in command) is Riley?? Guess we'll find out :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Read latest chapter to find out how good you are ;) lol; keep me posted on how I'm doin here ... :) |
| Peaches Girl |
10/06/05 - 11:10PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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Again, I like were you are going with this. Great story build. The general is a bad a**. Give me more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your input; I always wonder with my original characters and was hoping i did her well; i'm trying to make it obvious why she's just a little scary to Spike, and set her up to actually be a threat in taking on Buffy... :) |
| Peaches Girl |
10/05/05 - 09:46PM |
2: A Startling Discovery |
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Yes! Hostil seventeen! I like it. Cant wait to see were this goes. Any Angel appearances? R. needs a woopin.
Author's Response: Oh don't worry...plenty of Riley-bashing to come in this fic...hehehehe |
| Peaches Girl |
10/05/05 - 09:16PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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Cool story. I love a new spin. Buffy should ask her mom about being a witch too I think. Maybe they can do a battle together that would be cool too.
Author's Response: Hmmm...sorry, Joyce doesn't actually have much of a part in this story...not sure if she has any at all yet actually |
| littlewiccan |
10/05/05 - 08:48AM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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This is really good. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Keep me posted on how I'm doin'! :) |
| slayerfest |
10/04/05 - 11:24PM |
1: All the Things She Doesn't Miss |
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This is good stuff. I think, appearance-wise/gramatically, you're emphasizing too many words with the stars. The writing itself is enthralling. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review; I looked it over and you're soo right!! LOL I edited it so it should look a little better now :) Thanks for the constructive criticism, always helpful :) |
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