Reviews for Is the price worth paying?
| Fighter78 |
02/07/06 - 10:13PM |
3: Chapter 3. |
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You did good with this one. I have to admit I was a little surprised. but in a good way. Good job. =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I knew, I could be pressing buttons, with this. (Anytime you bring up JC, you can inrage people, on both sides) But I'm really proud of this one. Thanks. |
| DiabloVixen |
10/15/05 - 10:55PM |
3: Chapter 3. |
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I totally forgot about this Story... =( that is until you reminded me on your other Story... I Like it alot.. The First Parallels Many people in today's society, all those that look around them and question God's existance... and I love how it wasn't one-sided both Jesus and The First had Good arguements... Great Story... God Job
Author's Response: Thanks, I did try to have both side repested, because I didn't want to preach a sermon (THOUGH I COULD BROUTHERS, AND SISTERS, I COULD TESTFY! I COULD SCREAM THE PRAISE OF THE LORD, FROM THE HIGHEST MOUNTAINS, GLORY HALALUJA! but I won't ) plus i like the idea of seeing wath Jesus thinks of the way his peole represent him on earth. Did anyone notice the only thing that drove him to phisical voilents was the child molesting priest? |
| Ksue |
10/02/05 - 07:52PM |
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Great story! Wow. Even though it was dark and the First was trying to convince Jesus that he died for nothing, it had a great message. I love that one person can undo the wrongs of so many others, all in God's name.
Author's Response: Thank for the review. I'm glad that people seem to like this. I do think there is a good message to it, and I'm proud of it. Thanks again. |
| redmoon |
09/28/05 - 06:17PM |
3: Chapter 3. |
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Very well done. As concise and complete a short story as ever I've read. It also showed a hint of the psychology of the First. (Someone scared of the true nature of humanity, perhaps?) If no one else does, than I will: Pat-on-the-back.
Author's Response: Thanks for the pat. I really proud of how it turned out, but it's still good to be apreceted. |
| Beer Good |
09/28/05 - 04:45PM |
3: Chapter 3. |
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Good ending! (Though I'm wondering if Jesus knows what the Nobel peace prize is (and if it means as much - heck, enough war-mongerers have won it over the years - as it should).) But it's a great image to end it on. Well done!
Author's Response: No he doesn't know in this story (probably should have explained that, ops) But from the way the nun was acting, he new it was something big, even if it's been tarnished), anyway he was more intreased in the way she lived, than an award. Thanks for the support. |
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