Reviews for Big Sister
| Psyche2 |
06/26/06 - 12:00PM |
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I loved that chapter, amazing. The dialogue is perfect and the flashbacks help fill in what actually happened. I can't wait to see what happens next! I am on the edge of my seat! Update Soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try to update soon, but you have been warned. |
| michebabyblue |
01/21/06 - 02:02AM |
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Love the chapt its great that Buffy has woken up. When will she meet Angel, ooo exciting
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It shouldn't be too long before she meets Angel... |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/07/05 - 07:52PM |
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Wow. MissEdith. you did really awesome on the dream sequence for this chappie. i really really enjoyed how it comes from Angel's perspective. its totally awesome reading things that linger in his own mind. i can't wait for the next chappie. you must hurry up and update asap!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Angel strikes me as the kind of person who really would think/write things like that, so I just had to do that from his POV. I'll try to update quickly, but there's no guarantee.... |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/25/05 - 01:01PM |
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Love the chappie MissEdith. you're doing a awesome job on this so far. its like watching the graduation day eppy in my head as i read this. i love love love it!! I hope you can please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to finish the next chapter in a few weeks. I've got the concept down, but I just need to work out all the details.... |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/13/05 - 04:28PM |
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Since we all know that most of the fic was taken from graduation day, i loved it nonetheless. i just started reading the first chappie today but i read all 4 chappies and its really awesome. i really loved the whole Buffy/Faith fighting and everything and that some of the scenes are different from the eppies. i really love this and im glad i caught it in time to read it. You are doing a kick ass great awesome job on this MissEdith so i really truly hope you'll update really really soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know it's been a long time since I updated, but I'm working on it...I'm about 1/3 of the way through the next chapter (I've gotten hung up on the fight scene...oh how I hate fight scenes). I've been insanely busy, but I hope to finish the chapter within the next week or two. |
| Monkey Pants |
11/07/05 - 08:38PM |
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I liked Jim somehow, he has potential :) The Buffy/ Faith bit was surreal, but I loved it. All the characters were perfectly written. Definitely an interesting idea!
Author's Response: Hmm, maybe I'll have to bring Jim back then :P Glad you liked the Buffy/Faith bit; all the best dream sequences are surreal! Wow, it's been almost a month since I updated...I am going to update soon, I swear...I just have to find the time to, you know, write the chapter. |
| slayerfest |
10/04/05 - 11:16PM |
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Eh heh, I didn't finish that thought. It's a wonderful idea to have Faith as the one who woke instead of Buffy. I can't wait to see how it turns out. Write more, please!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had some trouble with the dream sequence, 'cuz it's such a great dream, but I had to change things, obviously, since they've kinda switched positions. There might be a bit of a wait until the next chapter because I can't decide which of the possible scenarios I want to actually happen...I hope that made sense. |
| little firecracker |
09/18/05 - 07:46AM |
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This is a great start, I'm really getting into this, I look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter, but life keeps getting in the way. |
| DiabloVixen |
09/16/05 - 07:02PM |
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o man i was really getting into the story... then... its gone.. .very good update soon... You can always get a beta to help somewhat with the writers block... but i feel your pain im still working on my story Best Enemies and it takes me years to write a chap because i have to decide what i want to do and where i want to go from there so that's probably where you are... i recommend just sitting down in front of a notebook and brainstorming
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm working on the next chapter now, so I hope to have it up in a not-too-long period of time. I totally know what you mean about WB...and yeah, I do need to just do some brainstorming. |
| i_hate_mornings |
09/16/05 - 06:49AM |
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Great start. Mixed me up a little at the start but i got the difference. Well done
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know it was kinda confusing, but that was kinda the point ;) |
| Beer Good |
09/16/05 - 04:19AM |
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This is a really good idea. Loved the "dream" sequence where they kept changing identities... Of course, Buffy and Faith have always been different sides of each other... can't wait to read the rest of it!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I love dream sequences, especially confusing ones :) |
| BtVS Air |
09/15/05 - 11:36PM |
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wow~good idea. very interesting twist. i was kind of lost when they were talking about the knife in the gut but i got it. haha. update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear that you got it and that I didn't totally confuse everybody! Although I did mean for it to be somewhat confusing....Anyway, it's just always bothered me that Faith doesn't knock Buffy off of the balcony when she has the chance, so I just had to write it. I will try to update as soon as possible! |
| axel |
09/15/05 - 10:20PM |
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I'm a little confuse, but I LIKE IT SO far, Keep it up. On a side note, I feel Jim's pain, all I can find on the radio is pop songs to.
Author's Response: thanks, i know that was a bit confusing but it will become clear...i think....lol, that's why i don't listen to the radio. |
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