Reviews for Big Sister
| i_hate_mornings |
09/21/05 - 09:17AM |
2: Waiting Room |
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good update. Oz was always the quiet one so it's great when he saves the day. Kudos opn the idea of having the actual events play as Angel's dream.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's going to be more in the next chapter relating to Angel's dream...once I write the chapter that is.... |
| Beer Good |
09/21/05 - 05:47AM |
2: Waiting Room |
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Great update! Apparently, it's "anticubital" - though I have no idea what that means. Can't wait to see what Oz's plan is... keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hmm, I just looked up "anticubital" and didn't find it, but apparently "antecubital" means in front of the elbow, which doesn't really make sense to me, but oh well.... |
| little firecracker |
09/18/05 - 07:46AM |
1: Prologue |
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This is a great start, I'm really getting into this, I look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter, but life keeps getting in the way. |
| DiabloVixen |
09/16/05 - 07:02PM |
1: Prologue |
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o man i was really getting into the story... then... its gone.. .very good update soon... You can always get a beta to help somewhat with the writers block... but i feel your pain im still working on my story Best Enemies and it takes me years to write a chap because i have to decide what i want to do and where i want to go from there so that's probably where you are... i recommend just sitting down in front of a notebook and brainstorming
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm working on the next chapter now, so I hope to have it up in a not-too-long period of time. I totally know what you mean about WB...and yeah, I do need to just do some brainstorming. |
| i_hate_mornings |
09/16/05 - 06:49AM |
1: Prologue |
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Great start. Mixed me up a little at the start but i got the difference. Well done
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know it was kinda confusing, but that was kinda the point ;) |
| Beer Good |
09/16/05 - 04:19AM |
1: Prologue |
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This is a really good idea. Loved the "dream" sequence where they kept changing identities... Of course, Buffy and Faith have always been different sides of each other... can't wait to read the rest of it!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I love dream sequences, especially confusing ones :) |
| BtVS Air |
09/15/05 - 11:36PM |
1: Prologue |
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wow~good idea. very interesting twist. i was kind of lost when they were talking about the knife in the gut but i got it. haha. update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear that you got it and that I didn't totally confuse everybody! Although I did mean for it to be somewhat confusing....Anyway, it's just always bothered me that Faith doesn't knock Buffy off of the balcony when she has the chance, so I just had to write it. I will try to update as soon as possible! |
| axel |
09/15/05 - 10:20PM |
1: Prologue |
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I'm a little confuse, but I LIKE IT SO far, Keep it up. On a side note, I feel Jim's pain, all I can find on the radio is pop songs to.
Author's Response: thanks, i know that was a bit confusing but it will become clear...i think....lol, that's why i don't listen to the radio. |
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