Reviews for Is the price worth paying?
| Fighter78 |
02/07/06 - 10:03PM |
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| This was interesting. I'll read on but if I find it blasphomous I'll stop but so far it's ok, I think. |
| Peaches Girl |
09/26/05 - 09:29PM |
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Slam dunk Axel. I knew you could do it. I love it so far. Cant wait to see how you finish it.
Author's Response: I'm working on the next (and last) chapter, now. So hopefuly in the next day, or two, It will be ready, Thanks for reviewing. |
| MissEdith |
09/15/05 - 08:25PM |
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This story is off to a great start. I can't wait to see what else the First shows him. I agree with Beer and Shay about the spelling, but it isn't so bad that it interferes with comprehension, so it's ok. But you might want to fix the spelling mistake in the title ("worth" instead of "woth"). I'm kinda spelling obsessed :P
Author's Response: AAAAHHHAAAA! I DIDN'T EVEN NOTICE THAT! HOOKED ON PHONICS DIDN'T WORK FOR ME! OK, I'm calm now, AHHHAAA!
I did go back and fix the spelling. I think I got everything. The rest of the story, hopefuly will only take one chapter, maybe two, then we'll see how it works as a whole. Thanks for reviewing, and I take the constructive criticism, and not get mad............AAAAHHHAAAAA! |
| Shay |
09/15/05 - 05:14PM |
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I like the idea, though I agree with Beer's review, you may want to seek out spell check. The grammatical errors and mechanical errors were the only things I found wrong with it! Good job, and I wouldn't worry about taking it down, if it offends someone than they can just not read it! -Marissa
Author's Response: OK, I don't spell well, everybody know that now, EVERYBODY!!!!!!
I'm just kidding, I'm working on the spelling, but since I don't have spell check anymore,I mess up sometimes. So please bear with me, a I'm glad you like the rest, Thank you. |
| DiabloVixen |
09/15/05 - 02:44PM |
1: Chapter 1. |
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YAY im so excited you posted earlier than you said i've been looking for it... You've written it better then i could have mentioned... and i agree you've written very good historically update soon
Author's Response: Glad your happy, but just because this is up early, doesn't mean it will be finnished soon (but then, thats what I always say, isn't it?). Thanks for the review. |
| redmoon |
09/15/05 - 08:11AM |
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Well written and as historically accurate as anyone could ask. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm trying to be historically accurate (though the First is, probaly more conserned with making humans look horrible). |
| Beer Good |
09/15/05 - 03:29AM |
1: Chapter 1. |
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Off to a great start! You might want to do a spell check, but other than that, it's a good idea and it's moving along nicely... looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Yea, sorry about the spelling, I don't have a spellcheck anymore, and an having to use a dictionary (which, in the long run is probably better for me anyway). I though I caught a the mistakes, but after re reading it, there are some glaring ones. But I'll try to fix that. Glad you liked the rest, Thanks. |
| whiteslayer |
09/15/05 - 12:14AM |
1: Chapter 1. |
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OMG pleaaaseee finish this!!
its cool, brings in a certain something more to the legend of the first!
Author's Response: OK, I WILL FINISH IT! I hope once it is finnished, it will be worth all the support it's gotten. Thank for the review. |
| always angel |
09/14/05 - 10:58PM |
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Good job so far. I think a story about The first visting Jesus before he died is a great idea. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I hope you like the rest. |
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