Reviews for The Lawyer, The Slayers, The Smurf, The Key, The Witch, and Neon Green Canvas Sneakers.
| girlygirl |
08/12/05 - 02:17PM |
1: The Lawyer, The Slayers, The Smurf, The Key, The Witch, and Neon Green Canvas Sneakers. |
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| I really liked the stories so far, but if you would put them into a big story as chapters that would be a lot easier :)
He-he what will Spike, sorry Will do without his dusters and shoes?:) |
| Beer Good |
08/10/05 - 03:07AM |
1: The Lawyer, The Slayers, The Smurf, The Key, The Witch, and Neon Green Canvas Sneakers. |
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I'd have to agree with the other reviews: I really like these - you've found a good balance between humour and seriousness, and the characters really sound like themselves... (loved Faith's reaction to Wesley's death, for instance). Only thing is it would be a lot easier to follow as chapters of one story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, really do appreciate it.
These three (or four) shorts really were written as single entries as the ideas came to me. I finally found where I wanted to go with "Judge, Jury..." it became the next part of this arc. |
| faith_slayer89 |
08/08/05 - 11:51PM |
1: The Lawyer, The Slayers, The Smurf, The Key, The Witch, and Neon Green Canvas Sneakers. |
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| I'm loving these little shorts. I agree with MissEdith, though. Your stories, if you combined them and and made them chapters in a bigger whole, bould get more visibility every time you updated, and more people would read and review. Speaking of, I hope you write another little short and continue this. It's really entertaining. Loved the reappearance of Whistler and a certain someone's Hawaiian shirt. Are we gonna get to find out what Angel's fate was? |
| MissEdith |
08/08/05 - 11:11PM |
1: The Lawyer, The Slayers, The Smurf, The Key, The Witch, and Neon Green Canvas Sneakers. |
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| I really like this story, er, series of stories so far. However, I was just thinking it would make things easier if you combined them into one story. You could just make each section a chapter. |
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