Reviews for Stripped
| Alex Wert |
02/27/06 - 12:01AM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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Good stuff. Nice, energetic dialogue, a reasonable plot, good humour content with the return of the kittens (I think chinchillas would make better currency).
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Glad to know people are still reading!! Thanks again! |
| Kevin |
02/22/06 - 01:36PM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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Awesome story. I love the interactoin between the sisters. Despite the characters being a little different, they're all in character.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments!! I spend a lot of time working on my characterization, not only to be true to each individual but also to try and push the limits of how the reader might think about them. Great to hear some feedback on it! |
| filmtheory |
07/18/05 - 12:03PM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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I loke your Buffy. Dawn banter. It's really good. The beginning segment was really cool and I love that Dawn is the glasses-wearing, bookworm, research girl. Well, I guess she is. I'll have to read on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad you like it. Hope you keep reading! Let me know what you think! |
| faith_slayer89 |
07/05/05 - 10:01PM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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The story's pretty good so far. You've got a real knack for the way Buffy and Dawn talk, but I was a bit surprised at how you portrayed Buffy. I never really thought she was the slacker type, even though she's not the one and only Chosen anymore. Glad to see Dawn's gotten more mature and grown-up, though.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! I am trying to take a different look at one way Buffy might react to not being the chosen "one" any longer. I hope you keep reading! Let me know how you like the development! |
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