Reviews for Stripped
| Alex Wert |
02/27/06 - 12:01AM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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Good stuff. Nice, energetic dialogue, a reasonable plot, good humour content with the return of the kittens (I think chinchillas would make better currency).
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Glad to know people are still reading!! Thanks again! |
| Kevin |
02/22/06 - 01:36PM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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Awesome story. I love the interactoin between the sisters. Despite the characters being a little different, they're all in character.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments!! I spend a lot of time working on my characterization, not only to be true to each individual but also to try and push the limits of how the reader might think about them. Great to hear some feedback on it! |
| MissEdith |
10/30/05 - 06:38PM |
36: Giving Up and Out, New York City |
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WOW. You've been busy. That was great. I've gotta say, I'm not really a fan of BX, but you didn't make a big deal out of it, and somehow that made it feel right, because I think that in this case, the relationship would have to be normal, and based on true friendship that grew into something else. And I loved the way it ended, even though I don't like Kennedy. My only complaint is that I wanted Buffy and Giles to have more of a talk about, well, everything.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it! Don't worry, I am working on a sequel that will deal more with Buffy and Giles. Thanks again!! |
| axel |
10/19/05 - 05:50PM |
23: Awkwardy Goodness, New York City |
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Dawn doesn't have a dad, to grill boys, but she hjad Kennedy, HA. Poor Willow, she gave up all her power to nthe slayers, did she. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! I love to hear what my readers have to say! |
| MissEdith |
08/21/05 - 10:56PM |
19: The Tire Yard, Brussels |
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That's really funny that Spike told Shark Dude that Buffy would pay his debts, lol. I'm glad Buffy's got Xander now since it's looking like Dawn's gonna leave her and it would suck if she were left all alone after everything :(
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for the comments. |
| MissEdith |
08/21/05 - 10:51PM |
18: There’s Nothing Like a Good Slay, New York City |
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I've just got one comment: in the first paragraph, "worrier" should be "warrior." Other than that, great job and I can't wait to read the next chapter, which I'm going to do right now :)
Author's Response: Thanks!! I will change it. I always love comments. Glad you're enjoying it! |
| axel |
08/10/05 - 11:50PM |
14: In Good Company - Brussels |
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Great chapter, first of all. second, your right, Kennedy wasn't developed on the show,the truth is she was just a bit player, but being Willows girl friend man her seem like a major one. And let,s face it, Willow haveing a girl friend, less than six mouths after her soul mate die, didn't make a whole lot of sence. Still I did like her, and think the critisim really isn't fair. so I'm glad you give her a chance (shut up Alex) anyway keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks Axel! I totally agree with you. It did seem fast for Willow to be dating. I think if the series had kept going a lot of the issues with Kennedy would have been resolved and people may have liked her more. I am going to try and deal more with the issue of Willow finding a girlfriend so quickly after Tara in my sequel to 'Stripped.' Thanks again for your great comments!! |
| MissEdith |
08/10/05 - 03:50PM |
14: In Good Company - Brussels |
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I'm glad to see that you're not just bashing Kennedy. I don't really like her, but she's not as bad as a lot of writers make her out to be. You're being true to the character, imho, so good work. keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks! I know Kennedy isn't everyone's favorite and I am trying to make her a more real person. She was left in the series without having much development so I am trying to resolve that. Thanks again,! |
| MissEdith |
08/10/05 - 12:47AM |
13: Things are Never Perfect, New York City/Brussels |
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This story is very well-written and I hope you update soon! I also hope that Buffy realizes her stupidity and finds herself and whatnot, although I'm sure much angst is needed before that can happen.
Author's Response: I am glad you're enjoying it! It's always great to hear people like what I'm writing. It makes my day! I have finished the story and I'm just going back to edit some so the rest should go up pretty quickly. |
| MissEdith |
08/09/05 - 05:46PM |
11: Drinking the Day Away - Somewhere In North America |
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I just started reading this story and I have a question about this chapter. You said that they have the Cleveland school for the American slayers (I'm assuming you're including South America) and the London school for Europe and Asia, but what about Africa? 3 continents seems like an awful lot to be covered by one school.
Author's Response: Thanks for bringing this to my attention! I had every intention of including Africa but I think in my haste to write and post I totally forgot!!! I am going to have to go back and fix it. Africa was meant to be included in the Cleveland school (I thought the London school had enough to cover with all of Europe and Asia!)
The American school does cover both Americas and Canada. It is a lot for both schools to cover but they are still new and don't have a lot of students at the moment. The gang will probably have to build another school as time goes on!
Thanks again for your comments. Constructive criticism is always greatly appreciated! |
| filmtheory |
07/18/05 - 12:03PM |
1: Dawn and Buffy - Brussels |
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I loke your Buffy. Dawn banter. It's really good. The beginning segment was really cool and I love that Dawn is the glasses-wearing, bookworm, research girl. Well, I guess she is. I'll have to read on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad you like it. Hope you keep reading! Let me know what you think! |
| Vamp_Grlz |
07/11/05 - 12:47AM |
9: Phone Calls - Brussels/New York City |
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this iz reallly good. update soon!
~angelzbabygrl
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad you like it. Hope you keep reading! Let me know what you think! |
| faith_slayer89 |
07/07/05 - 12:53PM |
6: Sisterly Bonding - Brussels |
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Eep - Neglectful Buffy, I do not like. It would be a bit easier to understand if you stuck with either past or present tense and stopped switching between the too. Good chapter, though. Looking forward to more updates.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. I don't mean for Buffy to be neglectful exactly. She is just dealing with a lot of her own stuff and doesn't realize what she is doing at the moment. Never Fear, she will soon! |
| axel |
07/07/05 - 12:09AM |
5: Remembering - New York City |
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I like the story so far, I wonder whats wrong with Willow, Glad you take Kennedy seriosly, most people just have them broken up, or her dead.
Author's Response: I wanted to write something that tried to make Kennedy more real. Glad you like it! |
| faith_slayer89 |
07/06/05 - 07:26PM |
5: Remembering - New York City |
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Wow. Now I'm even more intrigued as to why Willow's freaking out, and what she sees when she has her episodes.
Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments!! It's really great to know your enjoying it. Thanks again for the comments! |
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