The mental patient
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A girl with blond/brown hair is walking around in a place, an institution.
She is saying all sorts of weird things, nobody understands her. Then their are guys in white and black coats. The ones in white are probably the doctors, the ones in black, maybe security. No one seems to know that too.
Then the girl gives one of the doctors a kick, and tries to run away. But she doesn't get very far, cause the men in the black coats grab her and give her a shock with a stick, or something. She falls down.
"We need to update her medecine. Cause of some reason she's getting back her controll." A doctors says to a man in a black coat. "We can't lett her escape, if somebody would discover what we do here...." he says again.
"I understand" The man in the black coat nods and walks away. Some other men in the same black coat follow him with the sleeping girl.
***
"Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!" Joy yells and she does a backward salto and gives a vampire a kick. Dawn throws a stake to Joys. Joys catches it and dusts the vamp.
Their are four more vamps surrounding Joy and Dawn. They are trapped.
"Where is she ?" Dawn asks worried.
"I don't know, she should have been here already." Joy says and looks around.
"Okay, then I take the two on the left, you take the two on the right." Dawn says.
"Dawn, you're not that good a fighter. It's to soon for you to take two at once."
"You should have thought me some moves, like I asked... If I die, I'm goona come back from the dead and kill you too." Joy looks at Dawn and suddenly her worried face disappears and she forms a smile on her face.
"Are you laughing ? We're about to die and you're laughing ?!" Dawn says a bit irritated.
Joy touches Dawn's shoulder and whispers something in her ear.
"Look."
Dawn looks behind her, Cindy is standing there...
Cindy throws something to them, Joy's chakram. It flies throught the air and cuts one of the vampires' head of. Joy catches her chakram. They didn't even notice that Cindy was here, untill now.
There are three vamps left, so it's three against three.
The red haired vampire goes after Dawn, the ugly vampire goes after Cindy, and the leader, he goes after Joy.
Dawn takes a dive, the vampire falls in the ground. Dawn tries to stake her, but the vampire is to quick, and she punches her in the face. Dawn's nose is bleding, but she doesn't care. Meanwhile the vampir is trying to choke Dawn to death. Dawn reaches out for her stake that is lying a bit further from her. She finally gets a hold of the stake, and without the vampire knowing about it, Dawn satkes her in the back.
That's one down, two to go. The ugly vampire has one of Cindy's knives. So they are both fighting with a knife. But Cindy knows how to work with them, the vampire doesn't. Dawn calls out to help Cindy. "Need some help ?!" Cindy doesn't look away, her eyes stay focused on the vampire. "No, it's cool, I'm good!" She yells back.
She cuts the vampire's arm. Then he cuts her leg. It's a nasty cut. It's bleeding heavily. Dawn tries to help her. "No, stay back! This is my dust!" She yelles, and she shows her hand meaning that Dawn has to stay there.
She isn't standing very good anymore, but she keeps fighting, they're all fighters.
Meanwhile Joy has killed her vampire. He was cut in two with her sword. She sees the wound on Cindy's legg, and she sees that she's in trouble. So she throws her chakram, and with that, she cuts of the vampire's head.
Cindy gets back up and goes to Joy with the chakram.
"Why the hell did you do that ?!" She yelles to Joy, she's mad. She comes closer.
"You were in trouble, you needed help."
"No, what I need is for you to back off!" she gives Joy a little push.
"What do you mean by that ?!" Joy asks, she doesn't react on the push.
"I mean that you're suffocating me. Every time we go out fighting, you kill my vamp, my demon. You never lett me take care of myself."
"I was only trying to help. But it's your fault that I always have to help you. If you were a better fighter, who shows up when they're supposed to, then I wouldn't have to help you."
Cindy gives Joy a slap in the face.
They start to fight some more.
Dawn tries to stop them, but they don't listen.
"Hey!n Guys! Stop it! Come on! Why are you acting this way ?! Guys, just stop yelling for a second!"
She tries to seperate the two, but she gets an elbow in her face. She falls on the ground.
They stop fighting.
"OMG! Dawn! I'm so sorry." Cindy says and she reaches out a hand for Dawn, but Dawn stands up on her own.
"You know ?! I'm sick and tired of you two fighting everytime we slay something. We've been fighting side by for two weeks now, and every since this week you guys fight all the time. Well, you know what ?! I donn't care why you two fight, but I am saying this, if you don't stop this childish behaviour, I'm gonna go away. And you won't see me again if it comes to that. You have untill tomorow to decide what it's gonna be. If you want me gone, keep up the good fights with each other, if you want me to stay, you'd better behave yourselfs!"
Dawn walks away, Joy still calls out for her, but she doesn't listen.
***
Dawn keps walking and walking, she even comes up to a point that she doesn't know where she is.
She sees a mister in a black coat, and she runs to him.
"Excuses me sir. But do you know where I am ?" She asks.
He turns around. "Are you lost, child ? Lost in New York city ?"
Dawn thinks he's crazy or something like that because of tthe way he is speaking. And she might be right.
"I guess. I eum should go. Bye."
He grabs her arm.
"Hey! What are you doing ?! Lett go !" she struggles to get loose. But he is much stronger then her.
"Are you a smart girl ?" he asks her. It's starting to scare her. "I'm obviously way smarter then you, I don't go atacking girls in the middle of the night." he looks at her and says "You're right."
Then he gives her a shock with one of those stick things. She falls down.
***
When Dawn wakes up she is lying on a hospital bed. And she is beeing moved. She lookes around, she is tied up to the bed. She looks up, and there is that man who atacked her.
"Don't worrie. It will all be over soon." He says and he stands still while Dawn keeps moving. Some doctors ride her into a room. She falls asleep again.
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The next morning, Dawn is walking around in the institution, she now knows she is in an institution. She has these clothes on that you mostly see on mental patients. She looks like she's drugged. A nurse walks towards Dawn. She is holding a cup with some pills in.
"It's time for your medecines." she says and she gives Dawn the cup.
"Blue one first ? Then red choo choo one ?" Dawn says while looking at the pills.
"That's right. First the blue one, then the red choo choo one." the nurse says back.
She walks away. Then a girl with blond/brown hair walks towards Dawn.
The girl throws the pills on the floor.
"Don't eat them." she says. "They're poison." she ads. "Pick them up and follow me." and she walks away.
Dawn picks them up, the nurse didn't see it happen, thank god. Then Dawn follows that girl into a room.
"Come in." she says.
Dawn comes in, she still looks drugged.
The girls gets something from a drawer in her closet.
It's a needle. Dawn gets scared.
"N...no... bad bad bad... not good...bad girl... girl poison Dawnie...poison...."
While Dawn is talking and making no sence, the girls pricks the needle in Dawn's arm.
"Aaaaaaaawwww...." and she falls in the ground. She falls asleep.
The girl puts her in the bed.
***
Dawn wakes up and the girl is sitting on the bed, next to Dawn. She stands up.
She gets another needle out of the drawer and looks at Dawn.
"Say something." she asks Dawn, sho still is a little confused.
"Where am I ?" Dawn asks.
"That will do." she says and she puts the needle away.
***
Meanwhile Joy and Cindy are wondering where Dawn is.
"Just tell me why you hate me saving you ?" Joy asks Cindy, who turns her head and looks very sad.
"I don't hate it, you can save me, it's not that, but sometimes I don't want tp be saved, sometimes I just want to save myself, but you never lett me."
"I'm sorry, I never knew you felt that way. Next time there's a fight, i'll lett you save yourself and me." Joy answers and they give each other a hug.
"Let's go tell Dawn." Cindy says and they go to Dawn's hotelroom. Nobody's there. Nobody even slept on the bed.
"This can't be good." Joy says.
"I agree." Cindy says and she closes the door of the room. "Let's go find her. We'll start with the place we last saw her."
And they run of.
***
"Wh.. who are you ?" Dawn asks anxiously.
"I'm euh... I'm Krista, or I was five years ago."
"W.. what am I doing here ?"
Before she can answer that, the door opens.
"Quick, under the bed. Hurry! And don't make a sound!" the girls says while Dawn quickly crawled under the bed.
"It's medecine time." the nurse that gave Dawn those pills a few hours ago now gives those pills to that girl.
"Blue one first ? Then red choo choo one ?" she says while pretending she is crazy.
The nurse nods and she leaves the room.
Dawn crawles back from under the bed.
"Care to give me an explanation now ?" she asks.
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"Nothing!" Joy yelles and she waves her hand around. "You ?"
"I've got nothing too." Cindy yelles back, with her hands in front of her mouth.
The meet up at the middle of the street where they last saw Dawn.
"I have no idea what to do next." Cindy said dismayed.
"I guess we'll have to wait or her to show up again. We've looked everywhere, there's nothing left for us to do." with Joy having said that they leave and turn back to the hotel.
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"So, lett me get this straight. Five years ago you were walking on a street in New York when these guys in black coats, like the guy who kidnapt me, kidnapt you. And then you thought you were crazy for five years because of some medecine they gave you, and last month you found a few needles and you took a few and used one, and after a few hours you woke up and you were normal again, but they noticed it and gave you the threatment to go crazy again, but you had some needles left, and when you looked in your closet you found one again and you used him again, but now everytime they ask you something you act like you're really crazy ???"
"Yeah, that's about it."
"Okay, I have one quistion left, why did you give me a needle ?"
"I couldn't have another person be crazy when they're not."
"Then why didn't you give them to other patients ?"
"Cause it would be to obvious, and I think that the most of these patients are to far to be brought back. I had one friend, whom I tried it with, he died. They think it was a heart atck. But it was actualy me who killed him."
"You didn't kill him, if that happened, it would have happened anyway, it's their fault, they are brainwashing all these people. Killing people. And we need to stop it."
"But how ?"
"I'm gonna do a little spell that Willow, a friend, thought me."
***
"Take my hand." Dawn says to Krista.
Krista takes her hand.
"Just close your eyes, and think of nothing."
Krista nods and she closes her eyes.
"Water, earth, fire, wind..." and she repeats it several times.
"Bring me to the one I seek. Take me out of my mind so deep." and she lets go of Krista's hands, and falls asleep. Krista opens her eyes. Sheb puts Dawn into the bed and watches the door for if anyone would come in.
***
Joy and Cindy are watching tv when Dawn suddenly appears.
They jump up, they don't trust it at first.
"Dawn ?" Joy asks and she tries to touch her, but her hand goes right through her.
"Wow" Joy says and she jumps back
"Hi. I don't have a lott of time, so you have to listen very carefully."
They nod. Dawn tells them everything about the institution she knows.
And she also tells them what they have to do in order to save them.
Then she disappears again.
***
"Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" and Dawn wakes up.
"Are you alright ?" Krista asks.
"I'm good, they know the plan. Now, I'm gonna go back to my room, and waith there, you waith here."
"Don't forget. When they come and give you your pills you have to say 'Blue one first ? Then red choo choo one ?' "
"I know, I'll see you in a while."
***
Joy and Cindy are standing on the spot where Dawn was kidnapt.
"She said that we had to say these words three times in a row and then we would find the place they are." Cindy says.
"Then, what are we waiting for."Joy says.
"On three." Cindy says. "One" Cindy counts. "Two.... Three."
"Seeing, hearing, smelling, finding them..." they say three times.
Then a blue light appears. It's very shiny, and it looks a bit like a fly.
They follow it. When they stand before a big normal house, the light disappears.
"I guess this is it." Cindy says and walks to the door.
"But this looks such a normal house." Joy says while she looks at the house.
"I know, that's why it has to be this house, it looks to normal. So, if somebody opens and has a black or white coat on, we can atack." Cindy answers.
"Prepare yourself." and Joy knocks on the door.
***
An normal woman opens the door. She has a blue and red sweater on.
"Can I help you ?" she asks them.
"Eum, no, I guess not." Joy says, she thinks they're at the wrong house.
"Oh, okay then." and she closes the door.
"I told you this was the wrong hous."
"But it isn't, it's the right house." Cindy says.
"Hu ?" Joy doesn't get it.
"Didn't you see her sweater ? A red and bleeu sweater, just like the pills, red and blue, and the light that led us here, it was blue too. I think she's the founder of this sick mental thing."
"Here' the plan, we knock on the door again, and hide, and when she closes the door we stop the door from closing and sneak and save Dawn and that girl, cause just atacking, that's not gonna work, and we can't call the pollice yet, we have to have Dawn and that girl first." Joy says.
So they do that. They sneak in and search for Dawn.
***
Then they find Dawn's room, finally.
Dawn is tied up again. They think it's a part of the plan. But it's a trap.
When they trie to free Dawn, the door closes.
They turn around.
It's that woman with the blue and red sweater, and a few of those doctors and those guys with the black coats.
And the woman is holding a knife to Krista's throat.
"Run!" Krista says.
The doctors have some needles in their hands.
Dawn is loose and Joy and Cindy get their weapons. They look at the men with the black coats, they're vampires.
They begin fighting, and the woman flees with Krisat, Dawn goes after them, Joy and Cindy keep fighting, the doctors withdraw.
***
"Leave her alone!" Dawn yelles.
The woman turns to Dawn.
"No!" and her face turns into something weird.
It's a demon. Her face is blue and red, and completely deformed.
She throws krista against a wall.
"You... you ruined everything."
"Yeah, like I haven't heard that before."
Dawn gives her a few kicks, and she gets a few kicks back herself. Krista awakes and she throws a needle at Dawn.
"Use this!" she yelles.
"Dawn throws it to the demon, and her face swells up, and she explodes."
***
Dawn, Krista, Joy and Cindyhave won, and they called the pllice, all the vampire that were still there fleed, and the doctors were all arrested. Sme of the patients turned back to normal, and some have permanent braindamage. Krista is just happy she's out of there...
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