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Buffy The Vampire Slayer > BTVS - Season Two
The Substance of Evil: Ethereal Existence by Alex Mercado
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Disclaimer: (I created Vic, parasidic demons)Buffy, Giles, Willow, Xander and Angel are owned by Joss Whedon(all hail he. )Mutant enemy co.. . 20th century FOX, yadda, yadda, yadda
Author's Notes: I left "The Substance of Evil" pretty much open ended, and it didn't xactly make me happy, So I wanted to add a real ending. So if you are reading this and get confused.. read the original "The Subsatnce of Evil".

Note: Proofreading Credit to Chris Castro!



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Part Five

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"Vic!" Xander yelled, his face overcome with confusion. "Xandork!" Victor yelled from high above, his eyes flashing white with every blink . Xander narrowed his eyelids, placing gazing upon a frowning Willow. He gritted his teeth and took a few steps forward. Seth flashed his fangs as he smiled,"Follow me, stupid people!" he said, in his best snotty tone. Seth walked erratically into the abandoned building's entrance, and hesitantly Buffy placed the back of her hands in front of Xander and Angel's chests to stop them from advancing. Buffy's eyes widened as she quickly passed her hand across Angel's chest once again,"Firm." she muttered. Xander lowered his brow, staring jealously at Angel, who was sticking his tongue out at the boy triumphantly.

"Wait, let me go alone." Buffy muttered. She began to pace herself towards theentrance. "What the hell? She thinks she's a super hero!" Xander shook his hands wildly. Buffy slowly walked into the building, staring at the cobwebs and dust decorating the interiors. "Aw no," Buffy stepped back,"This dust will so ruin my hair! I need a strong man to get rid of these cobwebs for little old me." Xander and Angelscrambled over each other, pushing and shoving in their race to Buffy's side.

Xander stomped on Angel's left foot, where in an enormous pain shot into his nerves, stopping the semi-vamp suddenly. Angel's game face came on quickly. He began hopping on one foot, holding his bruised toes in his hands. Xander smirked and jumped to Buffy's side,"This is a job for a strong man, not for Vamp-nerds such as Angel." Buffy sucked air through her teeth,"Just push through the cobwebs you dweeb, my hair is too important."


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Willow was still halfway over the edge of the roof, and she could still her three friends conversation clearly . She bit her tongue, squinted her eyes,"I'm up here, going to die, and they're speaking about Buffy's hair," she mumbled out loud,"That is some shi..." Vic stopped Willow mid-profanity, pulling her to her feet and off of the dangerous height,"Well, well my pixie-like friend, how do you like the night air?"


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Xander pushed his way into the building, moving cobwebs aside. A large spidercrawled down Xander's forehead, and he stopped himself. "Arachniphobia! Arachniphobia!" Xander yelled loudly, as he wildly jumped through the hallways, Buffy eased in secondly , and Angel followed them limping.


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Willow looked at Victor, seething in anger,"Why did you take me?" she demanded. "Well, the sucky thing , you see, is that we were supposed to kidnap Buffy, but we screwed up," Vic said nonchalantly. Willow grimaced,"Weren't you Xander's friend?" she slid down to her rump, sitting on the dirty concrete rooftop. "Well, my red headed vixen," Vic stopped himself and leaned closer to Willow,"Are the come-ons working?" Willow's expression was more than an apparent "Hell no", for her to even say anything.

"Heh, heh, I see", Vic falsely grinned,"Well, anyways, The Sethster and I had a plan all along to kill off all of my pals." Willow bit her bottom lip and stared straight into Vic's empty eyes,"Why?" she said in her lowest tone. "Let's just say, i'm crazy like that," Vic flashed his tounge, licking his front teeth.

"Again, I ask, why," Willow's voice was filled with trepidation. Vic planted himself in front of her, resting his bottom on his heels. He droned on and on, about his celestial body, not of the earth. How he was stranded on the cursed planet, roaming the dusky lands, ethereal existence.

Willow, tilted her head back, gathering all the information.

"So you've just gone looney? That's it? You pair up with a demon, and go looney," Willow moved her long hair out of her eyes.

"Looney? ehhhh, not that far."


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The dust rose as Xander lurked about the ground, the small cracks and sounds alerting him to which parts of the ground were unsteady. "Hey Angel, this dump looks like your house," Xander smirked, walking slowly.

Angel felt his fangs grow in his mouth, gritted his teeth and let out," If you sweat in my suit, your ass is grass."

Buffy rolled her eyes, looking around. She could only see shadows and moonlight. The moonlight shined through broken windows, allowing some clear pathways to be seen, but nothing was too clear. Buffy stood still, a shiver crawled up her spine unnerving her. "Wait," she whispered,"Look at that." Xander turned his sight toward Buffy, as did Angel ," What's up?" they both said in unity.

Seth crept out of the darkness, milky white substance oozing from beneath his boots. Xander's expression was repulsion, staring at the goo under Seth's boots,"What the hell were you doing in the dark!" Seth waved off the remark, then pointed towards Buffy.

"Lets have a little ho-down."

"Did he just call me a prostitute?" Buffy sneered.



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