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filmtheory 02/21/06 - 01:17PM 3: At the Hospital Signed
The chair/culprit line was awesome. Classic Willow. I also like the argument about using magic. It's a great way to set tension between the people who just want Buffy fixed (Xander and Dawn) and the people who understand responsible use of magic (Willow/ Tara). And of course, Xander has selfish as well as altruistic reasons for wanting Buffy revived as soon as possible. The sooner she's awake, the sooner he can unburden himself of his guilt for yelling at her. For now, I imagine Willow and Tara have the upper hand as another slayer once awoke from a coma expected to be permanent. Still, the tension will continue as every day Buffy is in a coma, Dawn will suffer with absolutely no blood relatives to comfort her (unless Hank returns). I can imagine Xander (and possibly Spike), will lean on the shy and acquiescent Tara to revive Buffy almost daily. This is such a wonderful exploration of the characters.

Author's Response: I'm glad you approve. I really wanted to have Willow sticking up for Tara in the fight about magic to show how much she's grown this season, and how the two of them have grown together, since one of my favorite things about their relationship is that neither is clearly stronger than the other. Plus, I just love the similar bit in Older and Far Away.

Psyche2 04/20/05 - 05:59PM 3: At the Hospital Signed
Please continue!!!!!!!!! This is awesome!
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