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filmtheory 02/08/06 - 11:21AM 2: Strong Like an Amazon Signed
Another great chapter. The vivid descriptions in the beginning really made me feel like I was there. The scene in the high school was great. It juxtaposed the happy carefree life of an average teenager with the heartbreak that Dawn was about to endure. Referencing when Buffy got Dawn from art class to tell her about Joyce in "The Body" was great. It was a subtle way to remind us that poor Dawn lost her mom and now possibly her sister (twice) within a year. "Please let it be just an apocalypse, and not the end of the world" was a great line. It reminded me so much how the supernatural and the epic battles are something this group can readily handle. But even they are not immune to the small, personal tragedies that come to all of us and really do bring the end of the world as each of us know it.

Author's Response: Thanks again for leaving such an in-depth review. I'm glad you like the high school scene--I think it may be one of my favorites in this whole fic. In my opinion, Btvs is at its best when it's mixing natural "real-life" drama with the supernatural. And in the show, the real-life issues often do far more damage than the apocalypses.

axel 09/10/05 - 08:34PM 2: Strong Like an Amazon Signed
Deja vu, all over again (Damn that Warren) Will Buffy make, Will Willow still go all Hellrasier, on him, Will I stop saying Will. Good jod.

Author's Response: Um, that was a bit confusing, but I think there was a compliment in there somewhere, so thanks!
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