Reviews for One Tiny Piece of Metal
| Kevin |
05/19/06 - 07:02PM |
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| Awesome first chapter. I like how you twisted "Seeing Red" to give us Willow in action. I hope she pulls off some non=evil magic to save the day. I must read on now. |
| filmtheory |
02/08/06 - 10:55AM |
1: The Shooting |
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Wow- I really like this story. I think that's a great twist on "Seeing Red." I loved how you covered the emotional elements and internal monologues of the different character. Xander with his regret for the recent turn of events in his life and his treatment of Buffy (which he'll have to live with forever now). Willow and Tara and how happy they are. Even though we saw them wake up together on the show, we weren't privy to their thoughts as we were in your story. And then- wow- what an ending. What a twist. What a story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a great review. Willow and Tara are, to my mind, just so perfect for each other that I just couldn't let her die. And I just really like writing internal monologues. |
| axel |
09/02/05 - 05:08PM |
1: The Shooting |
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Intresting, we'll see were this goes.
Author's Response: Well, I'm probably not gonna continue this alternate ending, but maybe if I think of a way to make it worthwhile I will. However, I am seriously considering a sequel (using the other ending) but it's still in the speculation stage right now. |
| punk |
08/09/05 - 06:52PM |
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Really great writing. I particularly like your vivid descriptions, you really have a knack for setting the scene. I look forward to reading the rest!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Unfortunately I'm about to get much busier, but I'm hoping to get the next chapter out sometime next week. |
| Psyche2 |
08/04/05 - 02:05PM |
1: The Shooting |
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Awesome!!!!! I wish Angel and Buffy got together...anyway good job!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I wish they'd get together too, but that doesn't mean they will. You'll have to read and find out! |
| Monkey Pants |
08/04/05 - 10:31AM |
1: The Shooting |
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Interesting start. You know the episode inside out, and that's a good thing for a fic like this. Great ending too! I think you caught Xander pretty well, and I liked the bit with the popcorn for breakfast. It is something he would definitely do. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The popcorn bit is something I would do too.... |
| DiabloVixen |
04/18/05 - 05:03AM |
1: The Shooting |
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| great start update soom |
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