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carlyinrome 01/04/06 - 02:13AM 1: First Date Signed
I saw your author listing when I was putting up the new chapter of ALS, and since I am nosy and intrusive, I had to look . . . I hadn't read this one and it was a cute premise . . . and you did really wonderful things with it. I disagree completely with the first reviewer; "Charlotte's Web" is completely within Angel's character. Not only is he warm-hearted, but he's a bit of a dork. I've said it before and I'll say it again: I love your Angel, lady. Wonderful story.

Violet SS 12/07/05 - 05:09PM 1: First Date Signed
Just stumbled on to this ficlet. Good premise. Fun read. I almost laughed out loud at Buffy's confusion over existentialism. Two minor comments: 1) The Charlotte's Web stuff seemed a bit unlikely coming from Angel (though I totally buy him reading Little Women). 2) I had trouble figuring out who was talking a few times in the last paragraph. But those are really minor given how well you captured Buffy's unique brand of intellectual naivette and Angel's discomfort with current times.

BelovedSlayer 04/16/05 - 11:48PM 1: First Date Signed
Really sweet story!!. Great Job. It was about damn time someone wrote a fic about Buffy and Angel getting coffee. I was pretty curious to see how it would of turned out. I hope you can do another fic like this really soon. Keep up the great work!!!
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