Reviews for Just the Darkness
| Sinister |
07/26/06 - 02:41PM |
5: Stand In |
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| This whole story is so confusing and yet...I can't seem to turn away from it. Nice work! |
| Sinister |
07/26/06 - 02:14PM |
2: And Never a Grave |
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| I just started reading this story and I gotta say I'm kind of confused. Does this take place after season 7 endded? And I get how Giles died but was Buffy the one thrown from the window? Cuz the summary says that a mistake cost 'a' Scooby they're life so I thought it was just one that died but now this second chapter says different. Other then the slight confustion I'm having (which could just be me lol) I think this fic is awesome. It's dark and the imagry is great. |
| gumboy |
04/18/05 - 09:52AM |
11: A Breath Worth Holding |
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As usual... Excellent story with plenty of twists and an excellent insight into Faith's character. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks dude! Remember: It's not by redmoon unless it makes little or no sense! |
| gumboy |
04/13/05 - 09:10AM |
4: The Silence You Speak |
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| All right! Dark Willow is back and the big bad reveals himself. Great chapter... as usual. More Please |
| gumboy |
04/13/05 - 09:06AM |
3: To Eat a Chocolate Bunny |
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| Wow... Talk about a dark version of Xander, and yet totally appropriate. If Xander were ever to truly take himself out, it would be with a touch of his dark humor and thoughts about all that he has lost being in this slayer biz. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/12/05 - 11:14PM |
3: To Eat a Chocolate Bunny |
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Oh my God.That's horrible.He killed himself!I liked his joke though.Great story.
Author's Response: It couldn't possibly get any worse, or could it? Despair isn't through yet. Glad you like it. |
| Strange Bint |
04/11/05 - 09:24PM |
1: Tumbling Skywards |
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Okay, I fianally figured out how to review on this. Well, aren't you the Queen of Imagery! I totally new what was going on myself, but it wasn't really all that important. The present was what you focused on more than the plot.
Do you know that shot in "Requim for a Dream" where Jennifer COnnley and Jared Leto where head to head? That was what I thought of when you desribed Faith and Dawn.
Author's Response: Queen!? I resent that! Otherwise, thank you for the review. Now that I think about it, the shot you described is almost exactly what I was going for. |
| gumboy |
04/11/05 - 08:52PM |
2: And Never a Grave |
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| Dark and definitely moody... and nicely done too. It's very hard to write "darkly" and well at the same time, but you have done it. More please! |
| gumboy |
04/11/05 - 08:49PM |
1: Tumbling Skywards |
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| Wow. Totally blown away. Nice twist at the end too! |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/11/05 - 06:24PM |
2: And Never a Grave |
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I'm confused.Who's dead?Is Buffy the dead one is Xander dead?Who protected who?This is a very confusing story.Was Dawn doing drugs with Faith?What happened?Whose body was it that landed on the car in the last chapter?I'm so confused.That's a good thing.This is a great story.Please keep writing.
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion, this fic is more about imagery than misdirection. I have edited the second chapter for more clarity; thanks for bringing the rough points to my attention. Glad you enjoy such horrible, horrible mobidity. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/11/05 - 04:21PM |
1: Tumbling Skywards |
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Oh God.Oh my God.Please please please update soon or I will die.Great story.
Author's Response: There are better reasons to die than waiting for an update, but I'll try. |
| spikeNdru |
04/11/05 - 03:09PM |
1: Tumbling Skywards |
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| Very evocative beginning. I am looking forward to reading more. |
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