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toxicredlilies 04/07/05 - 06:38PM 1: The Talk Signed
That was amazing!!! I love how Buffy defends vampires and argues with Riley, saying that the way that she kills vampires gives them an honorable death, and how she got to him about the vampires once being people, with names, families, friends, past, and an empty grave. I love how you told Buffy's story of what happened to her in LA, how she became The Slayer, what happened when she came to Sunnydale, and so forth. I'd never even thought of the possibility that Professor Walsh might try to experiment on Slayers. And the part how Buffy says that the good guys don't win, they just try to keep the score even, and then comparing that to how you know that it's not "daytime if the nighttime never comes." You brought up a lot of points that were very effective, and very well done. It all flowed very smoothly and not a lot of people can do that. I can say without a doubt that this is definitely one of the better pieces of fan fiction out there and I'm adding you to my favorited list! I especially loved your writing for the following parts of the story: "Her sparking blue eyes narrowed to furiously glittering slits, and the tone in her voice nearly froze Riley’s blood. He had the fleeting impression of an avenging angel, come in all her golden fury to chastise a mortal for his presumption to assist the gods." "Something inside Buffy flared in that instant, something far stronger than the whining suburbanite side of her psyche that had always lamented her lot in life. Something far deeper and far more the core of her that was the Slayer and knew that now she could never truly accept mere normalcy in her life. She had been tested, and the mettle within her that had once been raw iron had been tempered to steel, and those flames, which were fed in part by Hell itself, now burst forth, as though his casual offer of the one dream she knew was beyond her reach was a backdraft out to consume he who was foolish enough to open a door on an inferno." Once again, it was extremely well done, and I loved it!
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