Reviews for Forget Me Not
| filmtheory |
05/04/05 - 11:44PM |
1: Empror's New Clothes |
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Okay, I'm only reviewing about the first 5,000 words. I'll post a few reviews for each chapter I suppose, lol. Great beginning. You have the character voices down perfectly. You've definitely have a great start. It has me really, really interested.
Author's Response: Thanks! Means a lot coming from you. :) |
| redmoon |
04/07/05 - 09:45PM |
1: Empror's New Clothes |
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Oh. My. God. You added more. See you in ten years.
Author's Response: Yeah, I got a little carried away. But, people have read the whole thing and lived to tell about it. You can skip to chapter 6 if you want.
That would be my adive for anyone who is interested in this fic, but is scared of the length. Go to 6 and figure it out.
I think chapter 2 and 5 are my weakest. I love 3 for Connor and Spike, and in 4 lots of stuff happens. But, I didn't quite know what I was doing yet, but in 6 things pick up. |
| redmoon |
04/07/05 - 09:05PM |
1: Empror's New Clothes |
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| I haven't started reading it yet, but 162,000 words.... Been writing solid since 2003 have you? Don't hold your breath till my next review: it'll take a while. |
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