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redmoon 04/09/05 - 10:13PM 2: old lovers reunite and fight Signed
I like your use of prophecy and ritual sacrifice. Angel is very well done in how he might react to another souled vampire (especially a woman). Try to watch your punctuation and verb tense, It'll make your story a little easier to read :)

redmoon 04/06/05 - 11:49AM 1: Another souled one Signed
Great concept! You've captured the characters. Keep up the good work (I can't wait to see how Buffy reacts)!
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