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filmtheory 07/14/05 - 04:40PM 17: 1.4 Must be Tuesday: Act III Signed
Another greta chaptee. The Vizier cracks me up. Willow's banter was awesome. You have Willow down perfectly. Definitley her personality and way of talking came through. The one thing that would've been neat that wasn't there is if Willow wasn't ewwwed by the throw up. I can kind of see her being like "Ah. The pre-fight vomitting. Good times." But you create so many oppertunities for great jokes in your story even you can't take advantage of all of them. I'm dying to know what the 8-ball said to Lucy. I know sex is coming. I can feel it.

Author's Response: LOL! I hope you don't mind, but I liked your line so much I swapped out the "Ewww" for it.

As always thank you for reading and reviewing!
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