Reviews for Damaged: The Ongoing Story of Dana
| Timan |
10/18/05 - 05:50PM |
1: Episode 1.01: Cruciamentum |
Signed |
a good start. i'm instered to see where this heads to
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy where it goes. |
| Fred |
09/02/05 - 08:18PM |
1: Episode 1.01: Cruciamentum |
Signed |
I am verry verry stupidand there fore didn't get the movies so... well any way I loved Connor pretending to be gay, i laughed SO hard, pleas, Please, Update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought Connor doing that would freak out Xander, but also establishhim as a well-adjusted American boy. I'm not sure how long I'll keep him around in this story, though. |
| Fred |
08/19/05 - 08:06AM |
1: Episode 1.01: Cruciamentum |
Signed |
wow this is asome! I've read 2/2 chapters and i'm hooked! Loved the star wars reference. Intresting dinamic between Xander Dana and Willow. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is by far my least popular series, so I'm glad you like it. I'm actuallt working on the next chapter now. |
| Monkey Pants |
05/15/05 - 07:36PM |
1: Episode 1.01: Cruciamentum |
Signed |
Great idea to focus on Dana. She has so much character potential. I myself thought the characterisation of Xander flawless. He said Xandery things and acted as a Xander would in my eyes. I didn't really get why there had to be a cruciantium (sp?) though, as I thought the rituals of the Watchers Council would have relaxed since its demise...even if the new ways are less secet and emotionally betraying. makes you wonder how Buffy would have taken it....
Author's Response: I hope Dana will make for a compelling story. I agree that she has a lot of potential. I just hope I can take advantage of that. I'm always worried about how a portray Xander, so it's a huge relief to have someone say I did it okay. I think having the Cruciamentum makes sense. It teaches the slayers to fight with skill and not just rely on their strength. However, it's less fun when they're unprepared, betrayed, and in mortal danger. If they know what's coming and the situation's controlled, then failing the test doesn't mean death, just more training. |
| DiabloVixen |
03/31/05 - 12:34AM |
1: Episode 1.01: Cruciamentum |
Signed |
Really really really good! I love it...
You express Xander's Personality really well. Update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was worried Xander wouldn't be Xander enough. Hope you keep reading, since the story doesn't seem to be too popular so far. :) |
| rockangelz25 |
03/30/05 - 03:17PM |
1: Episode 1.01: Cruciamentum |
Signed |
Awesome start. It lays out a lot of backdrop information in the start of the chapter. I like the way you're expanding on Dana's character as well as Willow's and Xander's. Guessing that Connor's going to show up as more than a voice on the answering machine sometime too. I cannot wait to see where it goes, so please update it soon.
Author's Response: Thaks for the review. I'm trying to keep the chapters of this story shorter than my others, so hopefully it won't be too long until I update. This one was mostly exposition. I was going to try to keep Connro out of this since he's in all my other stories, but with Dana's particular arc, I think I'm going to have to bring him in. So yes, he should be more tahn a voice on the phone soon. |
|
|
|
|
Rave
Barbie Girl (Becca)
biscuit07
Filmtheory (Jim)
Malice (Jess)
MebbtheScribe (MichaelB)
Reset (Allie)
Shay (Marrisa)
somnambulist29 (Shea)
Stephanie Loss
Wendyness (Wendy)
Questions?Contact Us
|
|
All stories on this site have been archived with the authors' consent. Do not copy these stories for your own uses without the express consent of the author themselves. Buffy the Vampire Slayer TM and Angel TM are © UPN, WB, Fox and its related entities. All photos on the site are © UPN, Fox, Warner Bros, and/or their respective owners. No profits are being made by use of these images.
Powered with the assitance of eFiction.
|
|
|
