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filmtheory 04/07/05 - 11:07AM 7: 1.2 Training Day: Act II Signed
Poor Xander- getting hit in the good eye. Lucy not liking Maya was a good idea- the more levels of conflict the better. Liv's test anxiety extending to her fighting is a really neat touch. My favorite scene was X's conversation with the 8 ball.

Author's Response: Glad you've enjoyed it so far. I didn't mean for Maya and Lucy to not get along, but that might be a good option to pursue down the road. Pay attention to the 8 ball... It'll be important down the road (as is Liv's test anxiety)

BTW - Love the work you've done on your multiple storylines. I don't know how you can keep track of them.
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